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  1. behind_these_eyes
    I don't agree with Day_Walker. That's mean to use her just to get some cheap thrills and then toss her away. If you want to stay friends with her if/when you've broken up, i wouldn't advise that. But you should never ever trust someone who looks you in the eye and lies. I think you're totally justified in feeling the way you do. Don't think you're overreacting.
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    I'm really irish too, my skin turns red when im embarrassed or anxious about something. Usually when it happens, I'm talking to someone who intimidates me or someone I'm attracted to. Since she you guys got along well, I'd guess shes not intimidated. I think you should go for it. Trying to read a shy person's signals will drive you crazy, and they'll never make the first move.
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    There's this website, link removed and I'm not sure what the exact url is for this section, but there's an article called "So you wanna lose weight". I printed it out and started reading it and going by what it said, and I've lost 25 pounds since last year. The thing with dieting is that different things work for different people, so what seems "easier" for some people can be really tough for others. I think this diet plan is realistic, effective, and healthy. Good luck with whatever you decide to do, you can do it!
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    I liked that, sorry I didn't see it when you first posted it. I know how you feel, I can't sleep either. It's the worst feeling in the world, but you illustrated it well. Good job
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    I haven't done that personally (I'm 17) but my mom's friend was telling her I should go into it. Her daughter did, and she only studied for like one year, the school was free, and if I'm not mistaken pay starts around $40,000. She didn't say anything about the actual job though; whether it was boring or painful to get through the day, so I have no idea what she thinks of the job itself. Hope some of that helped.
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    It's weird, my brother just moved out and I feel the same way, even though we don't get along at all. My friend told me that she was the same way with her older sister but the time away made them realize that they actually do miss each other, and they get along great now. We can hope?
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    I think you should be clear as long as you drink a ton of water that night to keep yourself from getting dehydrated. Have something to eat in the morning and maybe some coffee after a good night's sleep. I think they also make pills now that cure hangovers.
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    Some valid points, but I think great poems are based more on meaning than structure. Some pretty bland and empty poems have been written by people too focussed on the structure and less focussed on the feelings they were trying to convey. No one here is trying to be a professional; I think this is some of the most honest poetry you'll see, because it's written by everyday people who dont necessarily need an English degree to write well. Just my thoughts, I guess.
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    I really dont think her weight should matter that much to the degree you like her. If you're that affected by her appearance, maybe you should go out with someone else so you don't hurt her. That's just my opinion.
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    I think you may have a future with him, but it's dependent on a couple things: You might want to talk to him and set the record straight about how you're not dating anyone else, and reassure him that the other guys are just jerks. If that's not working, or you don't want to do that, I'd at least talk to the other two and tell them to back off, and that you're not interested (probably best to say it in nicer words than mine..) If he still acts weird and nervous, there probably isn't a future. Some people are just hard to get through to.
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    I thought that was really good, you're good at rhyming things without making them seem like you just put them there to rhyme and sound good without meaning. (which is something I can't do haha) keep writing, and who cares if it's not about a pony or a rainbow, at least it's great, honest writing.
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    that was great, I dont think I've seen any of your poems before, but I'm looking forward to the next.
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    I know right now, he may seem like a hypocrite and make no sense, but sometimes taking a break is the best thing you can do. Since it's late and I'm not sure exactly how to explain this, I'll tell you a story as an analogy. You'll most likely think I'm a weirdo who has no idea what she's talking about, but bear with me. From the first time I went to Disney World when I was 6, I would wish on every birthday cake and star I saw that I could go back there, but we didn't have the money. When I was probably 11, this kid Peter in my class was complaining about how he had to go to Disney World "again" with his family that weekend. I was dumbfounded and I just didn't get how he could think that Disney World was no big deal, but I guess his mom worked for the company and they went 8 times a year. Basically, Disney World is awesome, but you can't keep going there all the time and genuinely appreciate it as much as you used to, because it's "just another place." When you've been away from it for a while, you realize how amazing it was with every day, and you miss it even more. Maybe he really doesn't want to see other people, but I wouldn't preserve myself for his request. If he does come back though, don't be so quick to give him the boot; listen to what he has to say. Sorry for the mass of babbling nonsense if you didn't get any of that (or read it haha) but I'm just trying to help in my own weird way. Good luck!
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    That's really tough. He could be a completely different person than you thought. What stinks is that when youre really honest with someone you automatically expect the same thing back, and sometimes it just doesnt work out. You may feel like you're missing out on something, but if he wasn't honest with you from the beginning, he was probably just doing one of those online persona things. It's confusing, but i'd just move on. That's too much stress to have over someone youve never even met.
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    Once again, awesome. You're so talented, that really moved me.
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    I've been in both situations; one time i liked my friend's brother, and many times my friends have liked my brother. I know it may seem worth it now, but my advice is to find someone else. I know it sounds harsh, i'm sorry, but i've lost a few friends and the whole thing is just a ton of drama. If you get in a fight with him, which is pretty much inevitable in a relationship, youll be putting your friend in a weird position. if you dump him, she might take it personally. bottom line: too much drama, even if this guy seems worth it right now. good luck
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    That was awesome! I like this part the best "happiness to sadness is like the sun to the moon they go hand in hand but the moon rarely eclipses and blocks the sadness out" You really have a fluid style
  18. behind_these_eyes
    Wow. that was just awesome. Great job.
  19. behind_these_eyes
    That was really really great. I loved the refrain and how the wording was simple but kinda made you think in a complex way. Great writing
  20. behind_these_eyes
    aww everyone is so nice. wish more people acted like this is "the real world"
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    that was really amazing! great job
  22. behind_these_eyes
    It definitely makes sense, it's really deep. i thought it was incredible. great poem.
  23. behind_these_eyes
    whoa that was really awesome. you're a great writer.
  24. behind_these_eyes
    Great job, I thought that was awesome. It's really deep to think about, I like that. Keep writing, I like your stuff.
  25. behind_these_eyes
    In the event of my death Before I've said goodbye; If the world is alive But my life has passed by; If it's wondered at all What I've left in this place- For the ones whom I love, For the ones whom I hate, I write you a last but sincerest farewell, And hope all the best that I can All is well. I'm sorry I didn't try harder to please you I'm sorry at times When it seemed I don't need you. I'm sorry if I have left nothing behind But depressing notes scrawled With my pen on these lines. As I stop to reflect through my last living door I'm sorry I have So much I'm sorry for. But off with my past, I must bring you what's new; The things that I had That now belong to you: Take every judgment You passed upon me, And now judge yourself with your absent mercy. Take all of the nights That I spent all alone Wondering why I felt lost in my home. Take my perpetual Sense of confusion; My inability to see What is truth or illusion. And if I am leaving all of this behind Then I'm sorry for you, And I hope you will find There's still some benevolance Left 'on these shores', That right now for some reason I've chosen to ignore. I don't know, it sucks. I've never really been one for rhyming poems, and it's really long, so thank you if you even read this far. Any feedback is appreciated.
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