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  1. AnotherBrokenDoll
    Well i think its great Really well written.
  2. AnotherBrokenDoll
    I feel like that sometimes to, just standing back and looking at everything. Its great sometimes but it can be a burdon to. Lovely poem though
  3. AnotherBrokenDoll
    wow, thats really powerful and your wording was great. Love the way you wrote it!
  4. AnotherBrokenDoll
    Yeah you did go deep but in such a good way. Did it release alot of emotions? Because it definitely portrayed them. Its beautiful, and sad. Yet unfortunately it keeps happening. Fabulously written
  5. AnotherBrokenDoll
    i like it just the way it is, it shows the pain of addiction.
  6. AnotherBrokenDoll
    I'm gald you like it... Sorry liza but bad night lol I'm happy though iLoveMyBabyCairo thankyou for your comment, I don't know about talent but thankyou Gold Hawk I'm glad you could read it and feel it, though i guess its not the greatest feeling to feel...
  7. AnotherBrokenDoll
    So it feels right now, Feeling that blade dash accross my skin. Feeding the pain, Creating new sin. Forcing those fingers back down your throat, For something you thought had ended a long time ago. For the pain that you promised to move away from, Promises never were true though. And when the pain hurts so much, You watch yourself bleed. Wish that you'd die, Your suicidal thoughts are all that you feed. And the tears you wish to cry, Just refuse to flow. And you one again find youself acting, One again putting up a show. Then there is nothing left, Except the fradgile threats. No more tears, So many bets. One said she'd last just a day, Another whispers an hour. Well you hold her fate, Will she last more then a day, more then an hour. Will she break through, Give everyone there wish, Say her last sweet words, Let them feel such bliss. Maybe i do have the strength to cut too deep, Too bleed to much, And say my final goodbye. She whispers and reaching for the knife she give the fatal touch. And the note she left behind, Tell you that she loves you, She wishes she could stay, But i just can't do what you want me to do.
  8. AnotherBrokenDoll
    Loved it completely So true as well like you didn't hold back and i love that in a poem.
  9. AnotherBrokenDoll
    Loved it. I agree with gentle man, you have a really great talent for this especially if you don't write much and managed to come up with that I know how you feel also, and then you fake it so long you kinda forget who you were in the first place...
  10. AnotherBrokenDoll
    I loved it, your poetry is always really great, and you should know that you are a fantastic person!
  11. AnotherBrokenDoll
    Thats really really sweet Its nice to hear a happy poem once in a while. I really loved the way you wrote it, the pattern you followed was quite different from what i have read. Please post again i would love to read more.
  12. AnotherBrokenDoll
    I totally know how you feel, when you want to hate someone so badly but you just love em more and more. It sucks! But i guess that is life. Great poem you got your point accross
  13. AnotherBrokenDoll
    Thanks darling So true, in a way it would be easier for all of those girls to just tell the truth and come out and say i'm not the perfect happy princess you want me to be but i guess its just to hard. So they keep on fighting and fighting and then that day does come and well we all know the rest of the story.
  14. AnotherBrokenDoll
    Oh baby girl that is beautiful, absolutely beautiful. How are you? I haven't spoken to you in a long time and i miss you Your poem though was so emotional, just so powerful. Thankyou for sharing and hope to talk to you soon.
  15. AnotherBrokenDoll
    I agree to a certain point but i know many people (myself included) who have set out to change, changed their clothes, their friends all those things that you said but it just doesn't work. I write poetry and keep a journal, but still sometimes things don't change, no matter how hard you try the crappy feelings just don't go away. I do agree though, you can't start to feel better without making the change, but what happens when the change isn't enough?
  16. AnotherBrokenDoll
    Thanks I love all your work to, its so emotional
  17. AnotherBrokenDoll
    Tears keep on falling, Hearts keep on breaking, The last conversation is stalling, My soul is for the taking. And when you cry, I wipe those tears away, Yes when you wished to die, It was upon my shoulder you lay. But when the table turns, And its my tears that are streaming, When the pain simply burns, Your face is still gleaming. Theres nothing to worry about, The light is still in the sun, Theres no reason to pout, Theres no reason to run. Deep inside my heart, I know you'll never realise, No one ever thought i'd one to start, No one ever thought i'd be the one telling lies. Student councillor, Library monitor, Office assitant, Debater of the year... Kind, sweet, shy, A face with a smile, Never a tear to cry, Willing to walk 100 miles. Straight A's, Teachers pet, Nothing keeps me at bay, My future is already set. The disguise i used, The easiest way, To just pretend i'm amused, Never thought the price would be so hard to pay. But now my disguise has faded, And the fears that i made forbidden, Are no longer shaded, Are no longer hidden. Gone are the As, Gone are the awards, As they stare in amase, Its me getting rushed into the hospital wards. She tried to take her life, One whispers to the next, No one ever thought i'd hold the knife, No one ever thought i'd write the suicidal text. And when i awake, People look and stare, Say i'm just another fake, Say my life was easy to bare. But no one sees the hidden tears, Yeah no one sees the hurt, They saw what they wanted to after all the years, No more fears...
  18. AnotherBrokenDoll
    I have to go right now but add me on msn email removed, i'm here for you if you want to talk and i'll listen at the very least. Its important you talk about how you feel sweetie and don't try and bottle it up. It does no good. Everyone is here for you, bubiz.
  19. AnotherBrokenDoll
    Hey darl, Well i came accross with oil called bio oil But i don't know how much it helps and works. I'm trying it at the moment but i only started yesterday so... As others have said smaller scars will fade with time. Wish you luck and i hope you can stop cutting, Love alwayz rozie.
  20. AnotherBrokenDoll
    So true, you definitely should share again. That was really beautifully sad. It was really meaniful thankyou for sharing.
  21. AnotherBrokenDoll
    I really really like it, though its really very sad. I love: These scars on my wrists are proof that people like you do exist... That line is really touching and i understand that alot. Keep fighting though...
  22. AnotherBrokenDoll
    So true, people can be so judgementle... I guess you just have to ignore the People who don't matter and listen to the people who love you.
  23. AnotherBrokenDoll
    My gosh i can totally relate to that so much that you brought me to tears. Heartbreak sucks but you get up and fight all over again. I guess its the vicious circle of life.
  24. AnotherBrokenDoll
    When i accomplish something i feel proud... Until i go home and get told i should do better lol. But i don't think i can LOVE myself... I disgust myself is many ways...
  25. AnotherBrokenDoll
    Yeah well my family are stupid and completely blind. I think my sister knows but apart from that they all just believed my story about my friends cat attcking me... Its obvious it isn't from that but hey i'm not complaining my family are stupid and would say i'm doing things for attention and to just get over it lol. But i mean it those people who judge you on your past, well who wants them? Really they have there own skeletons and in the end they should be the ones ashamed not you.
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