AnotherBrokenDoll

We do I adore your avator by the way hehe. Very cool!

Looking back to when i first heard you say that you liked me, Remembering the happiness i felt, You made my life worth living, You made my heart melt. Every emotion i thought i could never feel, Rushed through me, I was in love, How stupid could i be. You were everything i wanted, My perfect man, You were a best friend, I was your biggest fan. You said you loved me too, You said i was beautiful, I believed everything you said, Thought even the touch of your hand was meaningful. But behind my back you strayed, I understand it was just a mistake, I know how much you were hurt by what happened, I know your not a fake. I wanted to help you, I could have held your hand, But it was over just like that, I was trying to walk in sinking sand. I was soon replaced, So much for "i need some space", I wasn't good enough, So you went after a girl with a prettier face. Now months later i still hear your name and shudder, I want you back more then ever, You were so perfect, I honestly thought we might last together. You had other plans, Now i mean nothing to you, And you live happily without me, But still i haven't got a clue. Just tell me what i did wrong, I'd change whatever you needed me too, I want to be able to call, I want to be able to hold you.

Thankyou for your comments.

I read this poem earlier and i wanted to say that its a really touching poem. You are an incrediably strong person.

That really is one powerful poem. You have alot of strength to write such emotions down.

I also hope that you will be blessed. Your words are so very powerful and the poem so beautiful. Good luck in in finding the one that you shall also bless so very much.

Sorry for the swearing i think i have blotted them all out myself. But it was part of the song and sounds funny without it. I know its not my best, but it expresses how i feel about certain stuff pretty well. Hope you don't mind it too much. You said, Take a look inside yourself, You will find a hidden treasue, You are more beautiful then you know, But i have to leave, Oh i have to go. She smiles through her tears, And she's cried so much over the years, She tries so hard to hide her ****ing fears, But you were always there to whisper in her ears, To make everything ok, To help her fight the fear. That boy, he took more then she will ever tell, She hides away in the dark, Promises nothing happened, Says its all their imagination, If they even had a clue, What that boy did to her, They would never pass her by. She smiles through her tears, And she's cried so much over the years, She tries so hard to hide her ****ing fears, But you were always there to whisper in her ears, To make everything ok, To help her fight the fear. She wonders why you made that promise, To be there til the end, If you were just like the rest of them, What was the point of trying so hard to be her friend. It took time to earn her trust, But you are ready to throw that all away, How do you do it, How can you let her stray? She smiles through her tears, And she's cried so much over the years, She tries so hard to hide her ****ing fears, But you were always there to whisper in her ears, To make everything ok, To help her fight the fear. And she's told you she would have slept with him, Just to make him happy, And she told you she wants to be drunk next weekend, But she didn't mention that its all so she can forget. You don't know what happened, And she will never tell, This little secret, Will forever be hidden quite well. She smiles through her tears, And she's cried so much over the years, She tries so hard to hide her ****ing fears, But you were always there to whisper in her ears, To make everything ok, To help her fight the fear. She smiles through her tears, She tries so hard to hide her ****ing fears, Where are you now?

Thanks fallen, its a bit soppy not much like my normal writing just a tad broken hearted at the moment so it just sorta came out that way. Ahh well more people out there

Dreams always have a happy ending, As did the fairy tales mummy read me, So i was not prepared, To find out that in me love you might not see. The princesses always got their prince, No one ended up alone, Sometimes i wish my nightmares, Were the only happy endings shown. Only so i would understand, That happiness might not be true, That i am not a princess, That my love might not be returned by you. I know that its not right, And i know it will never be, Yet these fairy tales still have me believing, That someday you'll see something special in me. Its a silly little thought really, I should know better then this, But i would do anything, To have just one love stricken kiss. I think about the night you held me, I think about the times you made me smile, I thought those smiles would last forever, But they only lasted such a short while. And now your gone, And i have been left alone again, But i won't let you see my tears, No one shall know my pain.

Really wonderful, as the others have said, so true..

My gosh you have talent that is a really beautiful poem. And so honest and true. Any girl who receives that is pretty lucky.

Thankyou so much.

Thankyou indigo, sometimes i feel guilty for writing this poetry. I've never been through it. But it gets rid of some of the emotions that build up inside. I think i've just heard so much about it. I'm not sure.

Thankyou I'm so happy people actually like it. It means alot to mean.

No, i don't play anything so i can't.. But one day when i'm out of school and stuff i want to get music written for it and i'll get singing lessons so i can actually sing my songs. That would be interesting at least hehe.

Hehe thanks, yeah i was worried cuz it seemed all mushy but the tune actually has a beet to it and some drums (well in my own little head anyway Thankyou

She has a hidden secret, The reason that she smiles, To keep this hidden secret, She will smile for miles. And there’s more then you will ever know, To this picture perfect girl, She cries more then she smiles, But her smiles they last for miles, As long as you’re around to see these smiles. She tries to keep it all in, Keep it hidden from herself, How she doesn’t even have a clue, To why she fell so hard for somebody like you, You were never her type, But you make her smile, Would you even recognize her, This picture perfect girl. And there’s more then you will ever know, To this picture perfect girl, She cries more then she smiles, But her smiles they last for miles, As long as you’re around to see these smiles. And when she gets home, She cleans and cooks and cleans again, Tries to keep daddy happy, She doesn’t want him drunk again. She doesn’t want another scar, Or even another bruise, All this girl wants, Is a boy like you. And there’s more then you will ever know, To this picture perfect girl, She cries more then she smiles, But her smiles they last for miles, As long as you’re around to see these smiles. Her smiles will last for miles, As long as you’re around to see these smiles.

Its a lovely poem, straight from the heart no lies or things added in just because they sound good and you can really tell that. I hope things work out but if not just remember you will always have the good memories of what they have done, sometimes people can't stay with us forever but they manage to change our lives in some way. That means they have earnt that special place in our hearts and they will never be replaced. I'm sure that you have a special place in this persons heart as well. You seem to be a lovely girl sarey. And your poetry is so raw and beautiful. Thankyou so very much for sharing it with us.

I really like this one, as SB has said you explore the things we like to put to the back of our minds and just forget. Its nice to see someone forcing it forward and speaking about it. Lovely

Really emotion. I like it alot

I second what girlfriend says. That is pure gifted talent.

Thatsounds so truthful, like it really came from the heart. How much longer can I play this game, Hiding my anxiety and fears? How much longer will I have to live in shame, Drenching my pillow each night with tears? That verse said it all. Like you were writing the pages of my heart.

Thankyou... I think...

Once again want to make it clear that i have never been through abuse. This is just a poem of emotions and feelings, not actualy events. She walks through the door, Her Daddy does rise, She knows whats coming, Angry cries. She screams back, As loud as she can, Tries to drown him out, But he won't let her, he is an angry man. She runs to her room, Slams that damn door, Yells into her pillow, She doesn't think she can take it anymore. Daddy comes back, Removes the door handle, Drunk and furious, He lights a candle. Laughing hysterically, He watches the flames burn, Smiles as the wax melts down the side, He grabs her arm and the candle begins to turn. She tries to pull away, He pins her down, He won't let her stray, He pours hot wax upon her frown. Her skin burns, And begins to bubble, Her salty tears, Create more trouble. "How dare you cry, you stupid child" Daddy screams and daddy yells, He grabs both arms and throws her away, In deadly silence he watches her knowing she can't stray. He has the power, He is in the lead, He is consumed by anger, Consumed indeed. He hits her once, Then once again, He loves to see her beg, Laps up all her screams of pain. When he gets to tired, He walks through the door, She picks up her blade, She knows this much for sure. She cannot go on, She can't feel this pain again, Its like her soul is so beaten, Its already been slain. She slices her wrists, Upon her bed she does lay, All thats left is her body, Soon to rot away.

I love it, it sounds like me in my relationships hehe. I like the way you wrote it. Very meaningful indeed