AnotherBrokenDoll

Just Seventeen - This poem could be triggering to people who suffer from self harm, eating disorders or suicidal thoughts. Just a warning. This sweet young girl, Just seventeen, She has this smile, Kind, so innocent, never mean. To those around her, she is the glue, The one who holds them tight, Yet when she is alone, her smiles are few. Silent tears fall down, Her face looks only to the ground. She’s waiting for someone to be her glue, Wishing that some day she would be found. Yet all they see are these fake smiles, To them she is so bright, Happiness they see, Never do they understand her fight. With deep new cuts, Secret trips to the bathroom, Tears are falling, She’s out of control, she knows what looms. Trying to stop, but she can't resist, Getting rid of her food, She doesn't want to feel like this, She needs to break this mood. So she cuts, she purges, She slices and vomits, The pain killers stop working, She dreams for the numbness. 88 pills, sit in front of her face, 88 pills tempt her fate, She doesn't want to die, But it may be too late. So she takes one, And just one more, She doesn't want to do this, She falls to the floor. She’s not so sweet, Not so kind, She’s not so innocent, She’s out of her mind. Scratching her skin, Cutting away, She can still feel your touch, She begs for you to go away. "Leave me alone!" She screams in vein, For no one is around, Is she truly this insane She takes the mirror, Her face it does reflect, She can feel that man, But where and how she cannot detect. She haunted, Shes scared, Fearful, Afraid. Nothing is left for her to do; She pours some pills into her hand, How many she doesn't know, Into her mouth, she feels herself floating off the land. Her vision is blurred, She turns her back, One moment your there, The next everything is black. Will she wake up? Just seventeen? There is no chance, This ending was never foreseen.

Thats a really strong piece. It said pretty much how i feel lately. Never doubt poetry is good. If it means something to you thats all that matters. I think you should post some more

Thankyou to all 3 of you. It didnt happen to me, although sometimes i do feel i know it inside out.

This is not a true story. Just a poem i wrote from my own head. This did not happen to me or anyone i know. Just thought you should know that. And suddenly the skies seem darker, The shadows drawing nearer, Her voice is stuck in her throat, Her screams, silent. No ones here to save her, Shes running from her fate, Shes trying to outwit it, She doesn't know she was bait. In the empty house, The creaky sounds of doom, She hides beneath her bed, Eyes held shut, this cannot be true. "Hello sweet angel", His voice so icy and cold, "Why are you hiding my angel? You should be doing what you're told." Her eyes leak tears of fear, Listen carefully you may hear, Her soft sweet wimpers, Oh she knows he is near. Her hands cover her ears, Her body out of control, Stiff yet shaking, She begins to crawl. "Oh angel why do you cry?" His hand upon her face, Can you hear his evil laugh, She is lost without a trace. So here it comes again, Her fate, her torture, To the cold tiles upon the floor she does fall, "Im just like your teacher, here to teach you a lesson" His voice echos through the room, His fists upon her face. His feet attack her sides, What is with this place? This is world she was born to, Left alone, all alone. So when his finished for the night, And she cleans the broken bottles, She wonders what she did, To deserve such a fate. And out of fear she does stay, Yet out of fear she does hide, Will they ever see her truly, The bruises she covers, the pain she smiles away. I doubt they will ever see, While the bruises fade away, The pain will forever stay.

I know how that feels. I really do. You wrote the emotions of me heart. (Although i am single atm hehe) Greatly written. xxAnotherBrokenDollxx

That is so sweet Violet is lucky to have you.

Thankyou so much Allie. Means heaps when people like what i write. Sorry i took so long to reply my hard drive crashed!

Its truly beautiful.

I don't think its emo really, its beautiful and sad, your very talented

justanotherchick, haha i don't write music unfortunately. Im not really good at music anymore. So i just stick to lyrics. girl friend, i was thinking about a few people in this one who made promises that i suppose would have been broken in a certain amount of time anyway. It was kinda sad i guess.

Yeah i did write it. Thankyou very much I love to write.

Here I am, Yeah here I am again, Waiting in this empty street, For you to come, For you to hold this shaking hand again. Cuz you were everything I dreamed of, And you were nothing I didn’t want, And you made me smile, And you said you’d walk a million miles, Before you walked away, So why am I standing alone in this rain? From the very first time we met, You seemed so unlike the rest, You had this look in your eye, Like you wanted to care, Did you ever really care? Cuz you were everything I dreamed of, And you were nothing I didn’t want, And you made me smile, And you said you’d walk a million miles, Before you walked away, So why am I standing alone in this rain? And now I wonder what went wrong, Was it the scars I held deep inside, Was it the way I cared to much, How did I go wrong? Cuz you were everything I dreamed of, And you were nothing I didn’t want, And you made me smile, And you said you’d walk a million miles, Before you walked away, So why am I standing alone in this rain? And you made me smile, And you said you’d walk a million miles, Before you walked away, So why am I standing alone in this rain? So why am I standing alone in this rain?

Girlfriend you are so caring, but most of my emotions are only slightly reflected in my writing, not an actual event. No need to worry hun.

And she wonders what went wrong, How something so seemingly perfect, Became so weak, So fast. And she speaks to the voices in her head, That tell she’s not okay, I am okay, I am okay, She does cry. But when everyone’s gone at last, And there’s no one left to see her past, She runs away so you don’t know, She has tears out of control, She tries to be strong, She tries to move on, But you haunt her every step. How can she forget? And she doesn’t know how, To voice what’s in her head. And she doesn’t know why, It got there in the end, She pushed it away, And wouldn’t let it in, But it’s consumed her, Anyway. But when everyone’s gone at last, And there’s no one left to see her past, She runs away so you don’t know, She has tears out of control, She tries to be strong, She tries to move on, But you haunt her every step. How can she forget? She wants to forget, She wants to be strong, She wants to move on, But you don’t care, And you won’t let her, So here goes now, A sad sad song, Alone again. But when everyone’s gone at last, And there’s no one left to see her past, She runs away so you don’t know, She has tears out of control, But when everyone’s gone at last, And there’s no one left to see her past, She runs away so you don’t know, She has tears out of control, She tries to be strong, She tries to move on, But you haunt her every step. How can she forget? Yeah how can she forget?

Its not real, or about anyone, a friend is doing a cd for people who suffer from domestic violence and she asked me to write her something for it. That was what i came up with. I guess i just wanted to show that there can be a way out, for everyone, you just have to be brave ebough to get out.

For the midnight streets, Seem safe to her, The subway such a haven, A place that she can go, Just to know, She can be safe. Home was never a safe place, Fighting against time, Try to keep him happy, Try to stop the crime. Keep those fists away from me, She would attempt to scream, Longing for a happy ending, Things aren’t always what they seem. Bruised black and blue, Tears were falling about her face, She needed help, She had a clue, She ran about the streets, No idea where to go, Just knowing that no longer, Would she welcome him home. Home was never a safe place, Fighting against time, Try to keep him happy, Try to stop the crime. Keep those fists away from me, She would attempt to scream, Longing for a happy ending, Things aren’t always what they seem. Through work she wore a tattered smile, This is how you meet. She needed a way out, You were simply sweet, You welcomed her into your house, Let her see true love. She now has a happy ending, She now can be herself. Home was never a safe place, Fighting against time, Try to keep him happy, Try to stop the crime. Keep those fists away from me, She would attempt to scream, Longing for a happy ending, Things aren’t always what they seem. Keep those fists away from me, She would attempt to scream, Longing for a happy ending, Things aren’t always what they seem. This can be your happy ending, Things can be just as they seem. Just let it go, You can be, What ever you dream to be. Dream to be.

Thanks gf, but as i mentioned, not romantically, and we are still gonna stay in touch. My emtoions kinda just took over when i wrote that.

Heyz, thankyou, it was written about someone very very close, not in a romantic matter, but yeah. Saying goodbye to people sucks alot.

Beyond Broken Promises Staring at the ceiling, Trying to hide these tears, I watched you walk away, Running to your arms, You have to let me go, Please don’t go. You promised me a happy ending, Said you’d stay until the end, What happens when those promises, Are beyond broken, To hard to mend. If I hold on tight, And dream away, Maybe you will stay. When there was no point to live, You made me smile, When all was wrong, You made me happy, With laughter, With tears, You took away my darkest fears. You promised me a happy ending, Said you’d stay until the end, What happens when those promises, Are beyond broken, To hard to mend. If I hold on tight, And dream away, Maybe you will stay. Three o clock in morning, Pills all gone, Vision becomes blurry, I have to say goodbye, You don’t answer, I’ll leave a message, I love you, but I cannot fight, Tonight I shall be my last night. You promised me a happy ending, Said you’d stay until the end, What happens when those promises, Are beyond broken, To hard to mend. If I hold on tight, And dream away, Maybe you will stay. If I hold on tight, And dream away, Maybe you will stay. (x 2)

I really enjoyed your poem, it showed alot of emotion and i like that. I hope things get better

Just a warning, its a bit violent.. Not one of my best, just some random thoughts (slightly worrying hehe - im actually not a violent person i swear!!) Through darkest of nights, And the strongest of mites, He walks her through that door, He reaches to her, His hand on her face, She falls to the dusty cold floor. He is nothing she expected, He held her close to him, She fought and she fought, But he held her too tight, She whimpers she cries, He breaks her dear neck, Watch her be swallowed by the night. She put a fight. Til the end of the day, He looks where she lay, Like a masterpiece ending, Blood on the bed, He reaches to her, Strokes her sweet head. All that is left, A trail of kisses to find, I’m sure she doesn’t mind. He is nothing she expected, He held her close to him, She fought and she fought, But he held her too tight, She whimpers she cries, He breaks her dear neck, Watch her be swallowed by the night. She put up a fight. And as light breaks through night, And the reflection is shown, He is so tempted, He is quite known, A husband a wife, He held a dear knife, And carved her like a stone. He is nothing she expected, He held her close to him, She fought and she fought, But he held her too tight, She whimpers she cries, He breaks her dear neck, Watch her be swallowed by the night. She put up a fight. She whimpers she cries, He breaks her dear neck, Watch her be swallowed by the night. She put up a fight. Yes she put up a fight.

Its a song not a poem, tell me what you think To the mods i'm very sorry for the swearing but i think i bleeped it out myself. Sorry again. You gave me hope, That last day, You gave me hope, The day you promised you would never stray, I fell so hard, Believed your lies, What a stupid mistake, Watch my heart as it dies. You looked me in the eye, You promised me you wouldn’t lie, Gave me more than I could dream, Reality is so hard it does seem, You have done this for such a time, This will be my last ****ing rhyme. And in this dream of mine, You saw past them all, It was me you were looking for, You were there to soften my fall, Now its all gone, My shattered heart is here, This blood will be seen, For now there is nothing to fear. You looked me in the eye, You promised me you wouldn’t lie, Gave me more than I could dream, Reality is so hard it does seem, You have done this for such a time, This will be my last ****ing rhyme. I am now my own tragedy, Just like before, You lifted me so high, Then threw me to the floor, Watch as I fade away, You can’t keep this at bay, This is because of you, And everything you do. You looked me in the eye, You promised me you wouldn’t lie, Gave me more than I could dream, Reality is so hard it does seem, You have done this for such a time, This will be my last ****ing rhyme. Promised me you wouldn’t lie, Reality is so hard it does seem, This will be my last ****ing rhyme.

Thankyou for making me smile.

Thankyou Its nice to know someone liked it.

So here we go again, The same old tale, "I love you i do, But i still need to set sail." The words you use, To tell me, That you can't stay, That i have to let you be. You can't even look me in the eye, Thats right i saw you glance away, Tell me as it is, Tell me you don't want to stay. Your lies ring through my mind, Your pointless words, Repetive speach, Like chirping birds. So look at me, Come on be brave, For a while you helped, But this is a face that you can't save. So turn your back, Just like you always do, Don't glance back, I don't want to see you. I've been lying now to, Yeah you think you know me, Take off your rose coloured glasses, And then you might truly see. I smile away, But i have lost it all, Everyone has gone now, No one will be here to catch me when i fall.