AnotherBrokenDoll

I've never dreampt the way i'm dreaming now, I've never held my tongue, To show you how. I've never hoped, Of this true happiness, Of this true fate, The way i am today. Today it is forever, Tomorrow maybe not, But why worry about the future, When today is all we've ever got. So for today i will hope, I will believe in fate and happiness, I will dream beyond all others dreams, I will smile, the smile of ever after.

Wonderful dear. Its like you write the words of my heart in a way i never could.

The memories of him, Feel only of the pain, The momentary happiness, All seems in vein. The joyous laughs, The heartbreaking tears, The childish giggles, Her many fears. He brought her hope, He brought her trust, He brought her safety, But for him it was naught but lust. She thinks to herself, Untruths are kinder she feels, He says he will catch her, Yet upon her knees she is forced to kneel. The pain in her eyes, The longing for his touch, The overwhelming love, Yet for him it was not much. She clings to the hope, His touch keeps her dreams alive, While his simple words, Draw her to dive. Won't he teach her to swim, This dark beautiful night? Won't he caress her skin, And hold her oh so tight.

Im glad i made your day deary. You deserve it. I honestly ment it though, you really do have a talent for writing. Have a fantastic dayy!

I absolutely loves it! Just another masterpiece from you. Its becoming a regular occuarance now!

Haha thankyou, im glad someone understands! Thats exactly it, its the one thing thats there when everything else turns its back. So thats why i get down when things dont come out right lol.

Thanks guys. Beoslasher, i know i can't force myself to write. But sometimes i wish i could. Writing is something i cling too in bad times, when i get a writing block i feel so alone. Almost as if a friend has gone. Silly but true.

Please note, i know its not exactly great. I dunno. I seem to fail miserably at writing anything at the moment. Perhaps my mind is too confused to get anything out that makes the slightest bit of sense. Who knows? But i thought i would post this anyway. Its my lame attempt at a song. Feel free to critize. And sometimes I wonder, Whether or not you mean what you say, And sometimes I wonder, Would the world just be better, If I could slowly fade away? And sometime I ponder, Upon those broken shards of glass, They reflect this heart of mine, They reflect this heart of mine. After all this time, I still want to call you mine, After all this time, It still hurts knowing its her heart you make shine, After all this time, I wonder can I fade away? But could I ever stay away? I just wanna know, Did you chose to hurt me so? I just wanna know, Why the hell did I let you go? And after all this time, I still want to call you mine, After all this time, It still hurts knowing its her heart you make shine, After all this time, I wonder can I fade away? But could I ever stay away? And after all this time, I still want to call you mine, After all this time, It still hurts knowing its her heart you make shine, After all this time, I wonder can I fade away? But could I ever stay away? Yeah, Could I ever stay away?

I love them both as usual love. The second one seems so beautiful, yet the ending so sad. I seriously admire people who can write love poems, its something i really cannot do. Hope your well.

So full of emotion as usual Beoslasher, i feel the anger and the saddness behind it. Just Go. Find my heart Give it back That verse said exactly how i feel. I love your way with words, they always sound so powerful.

Thats so sweet, shes a lucky friend to be a friend of yours

So true, what good is happiness if you do not know the pain? Loved it

Im sorry you are feeling so down at the moment. But pain does create the best poetry if you ask me, if beautiful and so sad, conveys how you feel wonderfully. I hope this week brings more hope and happiness then last week did.

Thankyou Blazer

She feels as though shes a pupet, Dangling by her strings, The world is in control, Her heart her only wings. But what good are the wings, When broken they surely are, So she is left to dangle, The controller never far. Its as though shes waiting, For that heart of hers to mend, But she wonders if its possible, Can broken hearts learn to fend? So still she hangs, Threaded to these strings, Moving in the way the world defines, Broken, beating, wings. She dreams to fly, She dreams to feel, She dreams to be, To simply live, To be but real. And when the world, Has had its fun, It leaves her on her own, Broken wings, on a child oh so young. Teach me to fly, Oh won't you teach me to feel? She whispers in vein, Her lonliness is quite real. Will you be the one to save her, To hold her close, So tight. Will you be the one to call her beautiful, Feed her dreams, Tonight.

Very beautiful and wonderfully written. As the others have said it definitely wells up the tears.

Thankyou, im glad you liked it and im kinda with you. Structured poetry can bore me sometimes. Its all in the topic, im glad mine was okayy.

I really really liked it. It was sad yet sweet. I absolutely love the last verse also, its very touching, i also really liked the first one. You got me from the beginning, and i loved it through to the end Lovely.

Thanks, its just generally i try not to think like that. I think about whats real and whats right here and now. Whats possible. So to be thinking like that feels funny. But thankyou for your kind words.

Baha they are long since gone. In actual fact i don't think i'm dreaming of a specific person. Much more the feelings of having someone there, so really i'm talking to anyone who wants to listen.. Now see thats lame

Another one. Simply beautiful, yet so sad.

Haha thankyou ferretman, im glad you liked it

Thankyou jeen. Lovely to get your comments. Piper don't worry, i actually love to write and generally don't write like that. I myself thought it was insanely dodgy. Though you being a professional probably would think that about all my work Its totally fine and i really do know where you are coming from. It was just a random rumbling i wrote down on a piece of paper and decided to post for the heck of it. I generally fail with love stuff anyway haha. Thankyou for your imput and no it wasn't mean at all.

Hear her words, Watch her tears, Feel her pain, Know her fears. Understand her addictions, Touch her broken heart, Be her guide, Hold her when she fears she is falling apart. Love her imperfections, Love her because of them, Love her beauty, Heal her scars when you can. She longs for you, She dreams of you, She wishes for you, She believes in you. Don't let her be wrong, Come back, Come back where you belong.

Sometimes it takes time to be truly seen by people. Its simply beautiful, im all teary now. Its like you knew everything i needed to here and wrote it down. Im sure so many can relate. On ena you are far from invisible.