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AnotherBrokenDoll

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  1. And I have to wonder, After all the days and nights that are behind us, The seconds that turned into months; Even years have now passed. Yet here I am. My hands trembling, Just as they always do. My eyes - they struggle to meet yours. For every moment they glance upon you, My mind; It takes me to the darkest of my dreams. The night terrors, They still awaken me. At 2 o'clock when the skies are as black as my broken heart, My body forcing me to choose: Fight or flight. Natural instinct. Do I stay? Do I run? Do I risk it all for your arms around me, Do I leave for the sake of my own sanity. Lonliness may be my only comfort, When the touch of a man is more terrifying, Than the knowledge that i may never know love. The realisation sets in. I may never know love.
  2. I can't see anyone else getting anything out of this. Its my own story. But i thought i would share anyway. Memories consume my mind, An aged soul, A bothered spirit. Anxiety of loneliness, Of forsaken abilities, Forgotten fate. The rhythmic beats, Of an empty heart, With too much love. With no radiance through humanity, No chance to share a beat, No sense of time. Silently she captivates, An audience, Of the broken. Satans turn, To be angelic, To encourage freedom. The tortured souls, Lose their sanity, Freedom became free falling. A lost race, To the unkindness, Of despicable cruelty.
  3. Just got goosebumps! Very very nice piece of work
  4. I used to be a fool, Thought guarding my soul, With naught but a single row of thorns, The only way to live. I would waste away days, months, years, Convincing myself that love, It did not exist. That only those weak at heart, Proclaimed sharing their lives, The only way to know happiness. I believed myself strongest alone, independent, self assured. I believed myself to need not others, For to rely on another human being, Is nothing more or less of an action, Of those with a fragile heart. My heart, i believed it beat simply for myself, Now however i realise, The only fools, are those who believe, That love does not exist. Even in your darkest moments, Where anger, disloyalty, frustration, saddness, tears, depression, Become your tragic story. I dare you, Take a look around you, Just for a moment.. You will see, Love? It is everywhere. Those who surround you, They love you. Even if they use not their words, Even if they use not their actions, Even if they use not their thoughts, They love you. I love you. Listen to these words, Believe all that i say, To you, i would not mutter a lonesome lie. I love you.
  5. Dazzlefly, I am very honoured, i mean i wrote this two and a half years ago and i haven't looked at it in a very long time. Feel free to use it, and i would love to hear an mp3 when you are done, thankyou, you just made my night like you cannot even believe
  6. I can't seem to get the thoughts in my head onto paper. This is what happens when you somewhat force yourself to write. Its not very creative, and the lines are far too long and wordy. But i guess it means something to me, so i'd thought i'd put it up anyway. And it seems, I've always been a little different, A little excluded from the surrounding world. I've felt the pain of death, The longing of unrequited love, The warmth of true joy. I've soared above the clouds, I've reached the melten rock of the earth. I've seen life from both sides. I am naught but that which encages me. Sickness, health, despair, laughter, Wellness and situations define me. I sway like a tree branch in a strom, Yet i am stable and steady as an aged stone, I do not sway in times of need. I am steady I am the shelter through the rainfall, I am that which shall not age, that which shall not stumble. Steady. Reliable. Strong. Yet it times of lonliness. I waver. I snap like the tree branch with the pressure of a footprint. I am a puzzle, the pieces sprayed accross the room, Some pieces misplaced, Lost forever? It is an option. You own the copyright to my puzzle, You may allow these pieces to be recreated, I belong to you. You hear me? I belong to you. Treat me as you will.
  7. Well its been a long time since i've read the poems in this section, and i was just looking a titles and seeing which ones interested me. When i saw you had written this one i had to read it, because i remembered the others i used to read of yours and how much i really enjoyed reading them. So that in itself is a compliment for you. I like poetry that reflects the way this one did. Looking over what used to be important, and the way it changes. So, i really liked this one
  8. I like the transition throughout this, and the obvious longing. Like you've let yourself be vunerable through writing even though you couldn't through speach. Beautiful
  9. I really like the colours you've used through her hair and the detail you've put into her eyes. It might be slightly cartoonish, but its beautiful work.
  10. I haven't got a name, so feel free to give suggestions. Its kind of just something that rattled around in my head for a while. I've held you hand too many times. I've been with tears, falling straight from my eyes. I've stood where you're standing. Those shoes, i swear i've seen them before. Upon my feet, they were there to view the fall. Your heart, it beats within my chest. I feel its warmth, its strength, its love, its loss.. I feel, you feel. We feel. I would risk my own warmth, my own steady heartbeat, to feel your warmth. I would give such a simply gift, of my last breath, to know your heart would never cease to beat. I feel, you feel. We feel. I see, you see. We see. Yet your blindness could tear holes in flesh. For your sight is clouded. You see naught but what surrounds you. Your vision lacks the depth of the ocean floors, does this mean they do not exist? Ponder my dear, on what must exist. Do not waste your eyes on sight. Put them to use, my love. View that which is unviewable. Love that which is unloveable. Reach for the unattainable. You shall then find no need for disappointment.
  11. I think it sounds really pretty Btws, go the taurus haha.
  12. I'm aware its not a masterpeice. I'm also aware it doesn't really flow correctly. It was more just random thoughts. But i thought i would share it anyway You were my safety net, when all was lost, you caught me. You were the shelter through the thunderstorm, you were the beauty through the lightening, you were everything to me. And now that i see you, for what you truly are, i'm broken, i'm afraid. And now that i hear, the words that were once mute, i feel it, the danger. It surrounds me. Don't let it get me, please, i'm tortured. I can't forget the pain, the endless hurt. I can't resist the only way, i know will make it fade, make it fade away. And i'm sorry, i know i will forever be lost. With you, without you, its become all the same. You were my safety net, when all was lost, you caught me.
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