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  1. AnotherBrokenDoll
    Thankyou TheFallenShadow. It means alot knowing people understand your words.
  2. AnotherBrokenDoll
    Agreed with all he above. Beautiful.
  3. AnotherBrokenDoll
    Thats really beautifully written. That person is so very lucky.
  4. AnotherBrokenDoll
    Thats really cute!
  5. AnotherBrokenDoll
    This is my attempt at a song. Yes i know its lame, but i don't know i just was in a mushy mood hehe. ooo ooooo ooo yeah. I wonder why, With you it took no time, To know my heart and soul, To know who i am for sure. I wonder how, You make me feel as though, No one else could ever know, How my heart is only yours. And with your touch, You make me feel at home, You let me be me, You are my perfect company. For you, You oooooo, You see deep inside of me, Further inside, Then i have ever let anyone else see. Yeah because of you, I am, Oh i am, Better off then ever before. I wonder what, It was that made you want to know me, My soul, My heart, My everything, Because with one sweet look, Into my eyes, You know all there ever was to know. And to say goodbye, Would be no wish of mine, Oh i could never stand, To watch you walk away. To the ground i'd fall, With only tears to see, With only anger inside of me, Alone forever i would be. For you, You oooooo, You see deep inside of me, Further inside, Then i have ever let anyone else see. Yeah because of you, I am, Oh i am, Better off then ever before. Yeah yeah yeah, You hold me up, Your arms so strong, Your heart beating so close to mine, And with that first kiss, This has got to be, Oh its bound to be, The night you take my everything. For you, You oooooo, You see deep inside of me, Further inside, Then i have ever let anyone else see. Yeah because of you, I am, Oh i am, Better off then ever before. Oh better, better, better off then ever before. ooo ooooo ooo yeah
  6. AnotherBrokenDoll
    Well aren't you just Mr Talented! Your work is very touching and very real. Your words flow well too. Touching!
  7. AnotherBrokenDoll
    Thankyou I used to love that song when i was younger lol. I remember dancing to it in my room... yeah i was a weird child, i danced to sad songs hehe.
  8. AnotherBrokenDoll
    Thats really nice poetry Really cute, and i can think of many people like the flower in your story. Thankyou for sharing your work.
  9. AnotherBrokenDoll
    Your poetry is always so emotional. Is wonderful how you can put such emotion to words and not lose any of the feelings. Really great work.
  10. AnotherBrokenDoll
    Another day, Another smile, Another tear, Another mile. Another memory, Another pose, Another cloud, Another dead rose. To many fakes, So many lies, No one bothers to hear, The small childrens cries. All they see, And all they hear, Their own stuck up voices, Ringing in their ears. And i have began to wonder, Where the love of the world has gone, All they care about, What part of your body looks wrong. Starving kids, Old men on the streets, Depressed teenagers, Women with violent husbands thinking a night without a bruise better then the sweetest sweets. Every family, Their own secrets to hide, Such large secrets, That familys do divide. Yet she is not cool, Because she is too fat, Or she is a nerd, For alone she once sat. No one invites, The child to the park, And on her skin, The only place she is left to make a mark. So look around, And see a child, Give them a smile, For even they could be so mild. A smile prettier, Then all the colours of the world, And pray to dear god, Its upon a bed each person can lay curled.
  11. AnotherBrokenDoll
    Beautiful Really beautiful.
  12. AnotherBrokenDoll
    Yeah beautiful. Your words are great because so many can understand them.
  13. AnotherBrokenDoll
    Thats really nice, she is obviously lucky to have you. I feel the same for my older sister, but i would never tell her. Its a cute poem
  14. AnotherBrokenDoll
    Thats really really emotional and powerful. I love it.
  15. AnotherBrokenDoll
    How i have told you, That everything is fine, That even when you are gone, Your soul shall still be with mine. And even if we fail, To see each other again, We shall meet in heaven, Oh to you i feel no pain. But i don't know how to go on, I don't know how to forget, That next weekend, It won't be against you i hold a bet. My laughter won't come, From watching you fall, With tears in my eyes, I realise its my reflection holding the ball. It won't be at your head, That ball is thrown, Nor laughter on my face, As you let out a painful groan. It won't be you, Who chases me til i drop, Giggling and puffing, Wondering if a ball on the head is what i'm going to cop. And when we talk and talk, And don't shut up, It won't be you standing, To make a silly dance up. And when i cry, It won't be you on the other end of the phone, It will be someone, To whom my past is unknown. And you promised me, You would never go, You said you'd never, Go else where to put on a show. And when you said, You'd talk to us soon, Was that another lie, That we will find out next June. And when you can't cope, Will in be my number you dial, Or will someone else take my place, When you have been away for a while. I just want to know, Would you answer me what i ask, Because if your promises are untrue, I will put on my hard mask. Pretend it doesn't matter, I'll continue to say i don't care, But in reality, It just seems unfair...
  16. AnotherBrokenDoll
    Thats beautiful. I think everyone has the dream to love deep down and to be loved.
  17. AnotherBrokenDoll
    That are beautiful.. Very sad though. I hate watching people and knowing that they aren't happy especially when it comes down to domestic violence child abuse or bullying. Its not fair and more methods need to be put in place to stop it. No one should have to go through being treated like that. I loved your poems they spoke the truth and had great emotion to them. Keep it up.
  18. AnotherBrokenDoll
    That is really beautiful, yet so sad. You have powerful words.
  19. AnotherBrokenDoll
    I'm glad you got up the courage to show her. Thats really sweet
  20. AnotherBrokenDoll
    Thats fantastic. You have written exactly how i feel. Just wow.
  21. AnotherBrokenDoll
    I agree its really good Your very talented.
  22. AnotherBrokenDoll
    Yeah i agree cute poem keep up your new found talent
  23. AnotherBrokenDoll
    mmmm not really... kind of... but not at the moment its hard to explain.
  24. AnotherBrokenDoll
    The same guy as always i guess... Though it could be said about a few people at the moment.
  25. AnotherBrokenDoll
    If i could heal a broken heart, It would be yours that i would heal. I want you to learn to love, For love is all you dream to feel. And if i could create one small smile, Upon your face it would be. I'd love to watch your smiling face, A twinkle in your eye is what i wish to see. If i could love just one person, I'd love you for all eternity, A kind sweet love, More magical then reality. If i could hold you in my arms, I'd hold you tight as tight can be, So much it does hurt, Knowing i have to set you free. For though my hearts aches, To love your passionate soul. Your heart has been stolen, By a girl as dark as coal. She is nothing you deserve, She is nothing more then hate, Hunny don't allow this wicked girl, To decide upon your fate. Oh if it is not me, You wish to hold at night, At least let it be someone, Who can restore your inner light. Don't waste your life away, Over someone who does not care, Don't be ruled, By someone so simply unfair. And if you ever dream of me, Or wish you had me back. Here i shall be waiting, Until my destiny turns black.
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