Moon Goddess

I like it. it's very truthful...

I agree with Samedy, have you checked how you will be judged?

It is alot of money but I guess you can't put a price on your dream. I suggest maybe finding a cheaper source so it doesn't seem much if not then I say it's worth it. If it's for a dream it will never be in vain. I wish you best of luck. Let us know how it goes.

That one makes it straight to the heart it's really penetrating...

I loved that part I really identify with it. I can honestly say I know the feeling... I love ur poems...

Thanks... coming from you it means alot I really like your poems they have made me want to cry I'm glad you liked it...

It started out with us barely friends Then my damaged heart you decided to mend You were so kind & caring everyday I couldn't help but look at you in another way I got lost in your eyes and smile And with you everything was alright for a while You knew my weaknesses but still you never went away You were there for me and gave me strength to survive the day I know my feelings and desires are wrong But the reality is that the true love once there is gone I remember the moments and laughter we shared It was nice being with someone who really cared My biggest fear is hurting you Because that is the last thing I want to do That's why I wish you could just forget me And not think of the things that could but can't be Somehow I can't get you off my mind And to the consequences of this I've been blind I will never forget the time we spent together But our feelings for each other are as delicate as a feather And so I keep my true feelings inside And welcome you with arms open wide With this I say "thank you" and forgive me I really care about you I hope this you can see

A very powerful and beautiful poem, I'm glad you failed as well. I hope that you can find better meaning out of life and never have to think like that again. Thank you for sharing. I know how hard it is to be without father...

I love it, it's really deep and I've felt like that many times I can really relate to it.

Yeah you can check my profile to see them. ^^

Thank you...

I absolutly love it! My friend is here with me and she loved it as well. It's like the story of every girl that pretends she is happy but then the day comes when she can't pretend anymore =[ I love it is full of emotion. Keep writing I love your poems!

Thanks I'm doing ok I guess and thanks for the comments on the poem. It was done with lots of emotion. I hope I will be writing more soon, if I do be sure I will post them. Muahz!! I miss u 2 Long time no talk =[

Alone, dark & silent night Trying to avoid you with all my might Knowing what you see is me is desire and lust A kiss from my lips is something you must I try to retreat, there is no escape I cannot scream, for it is too late I feel your lips pressed against mine And all I can think of is blood the color of wine Your hands caress me in forbidden place And I feel sick while seeing your pleasured faces I know how much your enjoying this A tortured, forced and disgusting kiss And still you said the fault was mine For promising a kiss that would come in time You took advantage of my vulnerability & innocence Now I lay on the floor with tears, nothing but Silence

Girls do write the "You know who you are" for many reasons, mostly because they don't want to releal his name and with the hope that he will read it. If you two are still in NC I suggest you just start talking to her and casually ask who that was for, if you were best friends before she should have no problem telling you. Best of Luck. Don't worry about the writing and always feel free to PM me.