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Caesium

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  1. All you'll ever be Is another distant Memory The way you looked at me Is the way you should Oh be free All you'll ever see Is how they want you All to be Now you're not with me The air is clear Can't you see? Over and over I rhyme To get the fear Out of mind Now I'm filled with hate Guess this is what You call fate. Any feedback/comments would be appreciated, See if you can guess what I'm trying to convey as well
  2. Hey, Here is another poem i wrote. As always any feedback would be great I lay in a daze My words turn grey All this pain That follows through Know that im thinking of you Lately i feel so used Beaten down My heart is bruised Lay close to me Forever be in exstacy
  3. I really like it. It has a nice flow to it. Reminds me of how i usually write lyrics. The words and story behind what your trying to say is not obvious (atleast not to me), Which i really find attractive in poems, So i really liked it
  4. This is a little poem i just wrote. Any feedback would be good. It's about a guy falling in love with some girl, And he waits for her and waits for her, but she doesn't show. The message that i was trying to convey was 'You only live once, Make the most of it. Don't wait around for love, Go out and find it' Im sitting in the dark Trying to solve the riddles of my heart There's something about you I knew it was there from the start. All our lives We've worked to build a path I'll sit at the edge And wait for you to arrive All this waiting I counted a thousand flies All on my own Looks like you never showed
  5. Nice work. Seems like you was speaking from emotions. 10/10
  6. I haven't posted on this forum in about 2 years. Yet it's still my fave forum. Here's a little song i wrote. It's still a working progress, any feedback is welcome. I do have a guitar tune for this song, I just can't sing so i ain't gonna record it Verse All These feelings we've had Have lasted so long now But it's over again But it's over now. Chorus And Your lost at sea now I can see you swimming from me Baby, can't you see What i need , is real. Verse Standing behind glass Watch you fade and pass And all that's left to say Is how you want me to stay Ending And you swim away now And you swim away And you swim away now And you swim away
  7. I've actually shaved my sack before...Experimental phase. Luckily i didn't cut myself, It was fine. Sometimes it itched on several occasions, But i spose lotion and such products may be able to prevent that. And that concludes my scrotum shaving story. Thank you and Goodnight
  8. Congratulations *claps* lol!! I wish u all the best. Good Luck!! Remember to name ur first child after me
  9. well i guess i wouldnt end all communication with her, But things would never be the same again, i would feel highly uncomfortable around her, which could lead to no communication after awhile, but i wouldnt just stop straight away.
  10. Nice body, Blue and or green eyes, Pink or black clothes, short (not too short,just abit shorter than me), Sarcastic, Girls who laugh at my lame jokes lol, Quiet-ish girls ( not too outspoken), hair worn down, long hair past shoulders, Glasses (not big thick black geeky ones, but tidy looking ones), Girls who play with their hair wen i tlk to them, eye contact (not too strong) and this probably the most important one CREATIVITY i love it more than any other feature,There are lot's more i just can't think. I guess they wasn't turn on's as such, just features i like to see in girls.
  11. That was good. I read about three of yours now, and they've all be awesome, i really enjoyed them, ur a very talented person. Wish u all the best. keep them coming too, Look forward to reading them.
  12. Seems a little rushed, but that's ok, learn from ur mistakes eh? keep trying,keep up the work
  13. Good poem. I agree with one of the other replyers you do seem very mature for ur age. Keep up the work
  14. Thanks for all ur feedback guys. Yea i prefer the crush aswell, because i wrote it about a girl, and the other 1 i didnt write about ne1,if that made sense lol! so crush came more from the heart in a way!
  15. Well to start so you kno what she likes, if i was you i would start off licking, then change to sucking ( or vise versa) and ask which one she prefers (she may even like them both mixed) and don't be afraid to ask,as it will make it a better experience. and also a neat tip is to suck an ice-cube for awhile just before starting, yea u may look like a right idiot but hey she'll love you for it. and remember this saying when giving oral THE CLIT, THE CLIT, IT'S ALL ABOUT THE CLIT. Here's an interesting fact Licking behind a girls ear is good, as there's something there which is linked to the clit.
  16. I guess thats true, but if you become friends or even good friends, she could possibly then ONLY think of you as a friend or good friends, i've seen that happen plenty of times. My advice become friendly with her, but not to the extent that ur good friends or barely even friends, just so she knows ur a nice guy, and knows you abit and work ur way from there.
  17. Well i used todo that too and i done it to everyone, and it was because i was a shy guy, but i have grown in confidence a hell of alot since then, and on rare occasions i do it still, but only to girls im attracted too and i don't even realise im doing it.
  18. No problemo, im just glad u liked them. Would some other people leave comments aswell, bad or good i aperreciate it all thanks.
  19. Hey people, im worried because i've been coming too quick, i just wanna kno does this happen to every1? isit just a phase like acne, or will it be like this permantly (i hope not), Please i need all the info i can get. and another i might add is since ive been coming too quick, ive been coming more too.
  20. Thanks guys and girls. I appreciate ur comments. I think i'll let her kno how i feel, I'll keep you people updated. Once again thanks alot.
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