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All you'll ever be Is another distant Memory The way you looked at me Is the way you should Oh be free All you'll ever see Is how they want you All to be Now you're not with me The air is clear Can't you see? Over and over I rhyme To get the fear Out of mind Now I'm filled with hate Guess this is what You call fate. Any feedback/comments would be appreciated, See if you can guess what I'm trying to convey as well

Hey, Here is another poem i wrote. As always any feedback would be great I lay in a daze My words turn grey All this pain That follows through Know that im thinking of you Lately i feel so used Beaten down My heart is bruised Lay close to me Forever be in exstacy

Really good. Well done

I really like it. It has a nice flow to it. Reminds me of how i usually write lyrics. The words and story behind what your trying to say is not obvious (atleast not to me), Which i really find attractive in poems, So i really liked it

This is a little poem i just wrote. Any feedback would be good. It's about a guy falling in love with some girl, And he waits for her and waits for her, but she doesn't show. The message that i was trying to convey was 'You only live once, Make the most of it. Don't wait around for love, Go out and find it' Im sitting in the dark Trying to solve the riddles of my heart There's something about you I knew it was there from the start. All our lives We've worked to build a path I'll sit at the edge And wait for you to arrive All this waiting I counted a thousand flies All on my own Looks like you never showed

Nice work. Seems like you was speaking from emotions. 10/10

I haven't posted on this forum in about 2 years. Yet it's still my fave forum. Here's a little song i wrote. It's still a working progress, any feedback is welcome. I do have a guitar tune for this song, I just can't sing so i ain't gonna record it Verse All These feelings we've had Have lasted so long now But it's over again But it's over now. Chorus And Your lost at sea now I can see you swimming from me Baby, can't you see What i need , is real. Verse Standing behind glass Watch you fade and pass And all that's left to say Is how you want me to stay Ending And you swim away now And you swim away And you swim away now And you swim away

I've actually shaved my sack before...Experimental phase. Luckily i didn't cut myself, It was fine. Sometimes it itched on several occasions, But i spose lotion and such products may be able to prevent that. And that concludes my scrotum shaving story. Thank you and Goodnight

Congratulations *claps* lol!! I wish u all the best. Good Luck!! Remember to name ur first child after me

I agree on this.

I like it!! goodgood. Keep it up!

well i guess i wouldnt end all communication with her, But things would never be the same again, i would feel highly uncomfortable around her, which could lead to no communication after awhile, but i wouldnt just stop straight away.

Nice body, Blue and or green eyes, Pink or black clothes, short (not too short,just abit shorter than me), Sarcastic, Girls who laugh at my lame jokes lol, Quiet-ish girls ( not too outspoken), hair worn down, long hair past shoulders, Glasses (not big thick black geeky ones, but tidy looking ones), Girls who play with their hair wen i tlk to them, eye contact (not too strong) and this probably the most important one CREATIVITY i love it more than any other feature,There are lot's more i just can't think. I guess they wasn't turn on's as such, just features i like to see in girls.

That was good. I read about three of yours now, and they've all be awesome, i really enjoyed them, ur a very talented person. Wish u all the best. keep them coming too, Look forward to reading them.

Damn that was good!!!!!!