lost_666 Posted March 1, 2005 Share Posted March 1, 2005 these are 2 poems ive been doing they might disturb someone but i feel i need to share them with someone..... cries She cries every night only for him She’s screaming and crying That’s where the cutting begins She grabs the razor and holds it over her wrist She starts to draw a picture, a picture with a twist An “X” going accross the vain of her right arm It’s not that she's an “ Emo” she just loves self harm As she bleeds she gets light headed She looks at her arm while the blood has spreaded A single tear runs down her cheek She's almost lost it and she's just gone weak She falls to the ground with a giant bang She gets back up and cuts again Her ocean of blood is around her feet She's done her work of art, her picture is complete She looks in the mirror and bows her head She stares at her wrist as they infection spreads Her hands are all covered in blood And the bottom of her shoes are covered in mud This how her story ends No parents nor any friends She's down in hell cuz suicide is a sin Now she will let a new life begin The cuts Cutting crying little girl why are you so sad? Little girl why do you want to die, I ask you why? Why are you cutting then bleeding hoping to die? Cutting crying little girl why do you cry? What’s wrong little girl is something wrong? Help me understand. Little girl dry your eyes, there’s always another life. Cutting crying little girl do you need help? Little girl why are you cutting? Little girl why don’t you wanna stay? Look little girl I’m always here, why are you crying then cutting again? Cutting crying little girl you say you don’t even understand? Little girl don’t cry, give me that razor don’t hurt yourself. Don’t cut anymore it only makes things worse. Cutting crying little girl see you stopped crying. Look at your arm all your scars are healing. Little girl don’t cry anymore look at the sky it’s not that black you see anymore. You see little girl the sun’s rays are kissing your face. What’s wrong? Why are crying again? Your not crying little girl you’re laughing instead. Those aren’t the tears of pain and sorrow; they’re tears of joy and play. Little girl just drop that razor, no more cutting crying wishing for dying. Smile little girl your finally free. Go play little girl, don’t be afraid. Little girl I’m leaving now, don’t worry look in the mirror little girl, it was you all along. You just passed your own nightmare little girl. No more cutting crying and bleeding. Happy little girl that’s your new name. Link to comment
cooldude1234 Posted March 1, 2005 Share Posted March 1, 2005 those are sad, but very well written Link to comment
lost_666 Posted March 1, 2005 Author Share Posted March 1, 2005 t i've been writting poetry for a while but these are the 1st 2 i've posted....i guess it's a way of expressing myself.. Link to comment
cooldude1234 Posted March 1, 2005 Share Posted March 1, 2005 yeah, poetry is a good way of doing it. Link to comment
Mun Posted March 1, 2005 Share Posted March 1, 2005 Kind of intense but pretty good. Keep writing Link to comment
ang3l2004 Posted March 1, 2005 Share Posted March 1, 2005 Very intense but keep writing ,It made me want to read the whole poem so kept me interested very good thanks for sharing Link to comment
lost_666 Posted March 1, 2005 Author Share Posted March 1, 2005 thank you. They were both quite long but i felt that i had to fit it all into 1 poem! if you know what i mean....... Link to comment
Lost2626 Posted March 1, 2005 Share Posted March 1, 2005 those poems are some of the best i have ever seen i encourage you to keep going in writing you have so much talent and maybe youre expressing about yourself and if you are i can relate so well keep going.. Link to comment
lost_666 Posted March 2, 2005 Author Share Posted March 2, 2005 yeah its just the way im feeling pretty much all of the time now so i just write it down. i try to write insead of cut myself and sometimes it works but sometimes not..... Link to comment
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