Censored Posted November 2, 2007 Share Posted November 2, 2007 Well, you have coaxed a few more out of me.....I'll insert some of the shorter ones so as not to bore This one is just a contemplation one i suppose. Inspire Hello to the earth, and all of its creations. I know we've never met before but you're my inspiration Every little leaf that moves, and every bird that sings. Helps me on my way to learn many special things. This next one was written for my best friend who's dad committed suicide. SILVER Silver shadows follow you, to you they must seem dark. Shining lights are showing you, to you there must seem none. Loving hands will comfort you, like the earth grows from the sun. Golden thoughts will shower you, from down here and from above. This one is just, well, i'm not sure, it just is. FLEA What a life it would be living as a flea All my food and all my rent I would get for free Never paying money No bills nor ills you see, Wouldn't it be great, living as a flea As is this one.... HOW How can a landmine be misused? How can a child be slightly abused? How can an eye be worth an eye, if from one two shall die? This next one was from the darker side of my "depression" I have a lot like this, more about contemplating what i would be thinking if i was to die Final Passage All i hear is my breath, it belongs to me no more, for the passage has been travelled, and at the end there is a door. I do not want to open it, I fear the other side, All the little sins i have, all the little lies. Is it heat and fury from Satans wicked charm, Or is it golden rays of light, where God will hold me in his arms. This one is a self justifaction for lying, which i tend to believe. Truthless What is the truth to hear as it echoes through your ear. Is it worth it, all the fear or would a lie prevent the tear. Last one for today is the reason its a good idea to let go and cry sometimes After the storm Cry....please cry, you musy cry until your dry, as the tears will flow they look clear, but with each tear, is an ounce of fear, a part of hurt and a piece of shame, as the tears relieve your pain. Let them create the raging rivers, spilling down your chin which quivers Create the storm of emotions, as after which is the calmest oceans. Blooopity bloooop blooop, thanks for reading Link to comment
sandyv Posted November 2, 2007 Share Posted November 2, 2007 Those are just beautiful Niceguy!.... You seem to be very talented... ! Link to comment
Jeen Posted November 2, 2007 Share Posted November 2, 2007 WOW! You are a master at this. Thanks from Jeen Blooopity bloooop blooop we want more. Link to comment
comfyshoes Posted November 2, 2007 Share Posted November 2, 2007 nice work. don't you find that poetry is such a wonderful way to purge? i only recently started sharing mine here, though they don't seem to be as well received as yours. keep writing, fella. shoes Link to comment
Censored Posted November 3, 2007 Author Share Posted November 3, 2007 Thanks for your kind words all, Comfy, i have found that writing is an incredibly powerful and personal way to purge. The the next step for me i suppose is to share as you are doing......It took seeing other people share to give me the confidence to share as well Link to comment
kuiks8 Posted April 4, 2008 Share Posted April 4, 2008 I like them all but I especially liked After the Storm and Final Passage- You have a beautiful way with words and a very eloquent way of writing emotion! Link to comment
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