Pain

[doyathink]

Night falls...doubts rise

 

...and the fear of knowing nothing creeps in.

 

Loneliness becomes your companion

 

...depression becomes your friend

 

...the world changes shape, everything becomes alien.

 

Sorrow emanates from you, in your soul a bleeding heart

 

Pain is all you know

 

...suffering is all you practice.

 

The demons dance insanely

 

Pain is only eased by greater pain.

 

A vacuum inside sucks away everything leaving you with

 

......nothing, emptiness.

 

All attempts have failed, all avenues now blocked.

 

You are behind God's back and persecution becomes your punishment.

 

The leaves turn brown and die

 

......a cold wind caresses your body.

 

Lost in a maze, searching for a way out

 

Check............and mate

 

......the game is over, the battle is lost.

 

Feel free to dance among the dead.

[Ipso Fracto Man]

Every word, perfection.

 

But how are you able to read my thoughts?

[Dako]

I feel a group hug comi....no, guess not.

[doyathink]

Because this is the world I live in. And this is what love does to you. This is what love is.......

[Ipso Fracto Man]

I got mine from Santa Claus. I guess I was a bad boy.

[Dako]

T,

I'm certain that many people here love you, and want to help.

You don't deserve pain, and when it eases, you'll see a new future.

[Ms. Babydoll]

I really like your poem, it has something so mysterious about it, well done!

[TheFallenShadow]

exquisite poem, someone that truly knows the suffering of a soul, that is seen with more then short sighted eyes....Well done, you said much in your writing....all i can say is that it was very very good

[Ipso Fracto Man]

I lose my capacity to love, my sense of humor and my will to live, and your poem is the first thing I notice when I go online. What are the odds?

 

Isn't it ironic... doyathink?

Isn't it ironic... yeah, love really does stink.

 

Run away with me? We can hitchhike to Belize and live off iguanas and coconuts.

[SkylinesTurnstiles]

Hey.

I love it.I can really relate to it.I hope you write more soon

[yeawutever]

Wow, I think this your first time posting on the poetry forum doyathink. You're right about everything changes in the world. Dirty things always happen, some people are cruel but only you are responsible for the choices you make in life, no one else but YOU!!!!!!!

 

Great poem by the way!!!!!!!!

[doyathink]

Thanks guys!

[desertnomad]

Fantastic poem 8)

[bigredvick]

chill down my spine. (good thing)

[doyathink]

.....thanks!

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

Its great! Keep writing i love the feeling you gave off during that poem!