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EQD

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  1. oh.. i know what he wanted then.. just sprinkle some glitter effect on his skin. *nods* i bet thats the finishing touch he's craving.
  2. thin the hair, it seems too full. go back and redo the lips, the shadow will do a slight break before the lipline. in your picture there is no break, making it look like you put a sticker of lips on the picture. there is no 3d feel to it. eyes spaced further apart. (rule is one eye width between the two) and reshape and slightly shorten the nose... or extend the jaw and shift the lips down. the mouth being agape is going to change your entire face shape, so you must take that into consideration. and his left hand needs a little work. what i do like about the picture is the shading effects of the skin and clothing, curtains and other objects. this will of course help you if you apply it to the lips. just practice on facial expressions and anatomy of the skull and you'll be set.
  3. In the Fall Not quite hard as the stones that mark the bodies Not quite the same empty grey This time of year you see the 40ft bouquets This time of year is their 4th of july A few thousand decaying hearts discarded vessels of extrodinary lives once lead They're fed on and up from the ground the colors shoot off like a flare in the sky A bit of chill and the endless chatter of the leaves like a grandstand of spectators always whipsering to eachother words you cant quite make out. Enjoy your show guys... its all for you.
  4. I have yet to do any contracted work so I have no idea what I would charge.
  5. here is Hatter with one more day on him... lol... ooooo!
  6. thats intentional. in the picture i'm drawing it off of his eyes arent straight. and oddly enough it actually bothers me just a bit, but thats just because i'm a perfectionist. when i look at it though the face is somewhat frightening. which i give a thumbs up to
  7. so far on the Mad Hatter. a few flaws but i'm going to finish it. should be worth it. update on the Hatter below V V V V
  8. Awwww..... you guys are going to make me tear up *covers eyes* (i'm becoming so emotional i know)
  9. thank you guys. i'm proud of it too. its the very very very first picture of a horse i've ever drawn that captures the eye just right. this was a big thing for me.
  10. give it two more months.. i'm sure i'll be back for more lol
  11. and yet again i read it.. i still like that poem. and i forgot i wrote it.. also forgot that i replied saying i forgot i wrote it. this seems to be a continuing cycle
  12. i like it. thanks for sharing wave
  13. dagless you are killing me with these wonderful poems.
  14. hm.. i'm pretty happy with that poem^ already forgot i wrote it. but reading it again, not bad.
  15. What it feels like to want. Outside this perfect circle of chaos and debris there is only one thing that makes sense And in and of itself even that leaves so many inconsistencies behind My head comes off and i dont think like i used to When i look at you its a brilliant static And i am just a child in june captivated by this glowing yellow light. Somewhat close and floating, but can i ever catch it? And the distance seems to be getting further and further, the miles stretch for hours only when i'm coming back home though, and leaving you behind. And it rips at me, and it digs into me We fear the same things... and i miss you terribly.
  16. thanks dag. it comes and goes. i dont have anything in mind right now though.
  17. i vote this as my favorite poem ever posted on ENA
  18. oh my god... this is an amazing poem. i'm saving it if you dont mind. bravo!
  19. Thoughts and Faith Its not a mistake, please dont break the board that i am walking on, i just couldnt take So i take my faith and i act light But when the future is so bright tell me baby does it feel right for you too?
  20. Poems. 3-2-1-go Hopelessness Why did you have to go? Why must you leave? Amble around my cold apartment Nothing sparks my interest The pain is long and deep I cannot dream, I do not sleep.
  21. ? this thread was made in 03
  22. really really young. like about--16. anyway i didnt even know it existed until now. so critique me 6 years ago. "Gain" I am here lying in the bed we made love in the bed that we used to say "love" in But that love is no longer here Its not in my heart It disappeared Not even a hole or feeling of emptiness that perhaps is the reason for sorrow I dont miss you, i confess But i do miss love I miss showing and feeling it for someone It gave me purpose when nothing else mattered This sorrow not near enough for a gun But my soul, still numb, broke and tattered ----i dont know if this second part is part of the same poem or a new one--- I feel adrift on a raft at sea without thinking or feeling time and hope are lost and beyond recall i stare at the sky my disheveled and bruised body strewn upon the raft like a bony drape I wait I wait
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