Clawing at the Flyscreen

[Dregnought]

I look out.. to the bueatiful world.

The sun shineing.. the wind blowing.

Paradise, I was in.

 

There is an open door.

Giving me free passage to the great open.

Paradise, I had.

 

One day, the door had closed.

A flyscreen, had taken place.

Paradise, I could no longer reach.

 

I stand there, face stuck to the screen.

Clawing away, feeling the breeze, seeing the outside.

Paradise, I wanted.

 

Each day, the screen slowly got thicker, sturdier.

I tried so hard to my way out.

Paradise, slowly was slipping away.

 

Then it rained in my room.

Tears of pain and hurt, of what I had lost.

Paradise, did not want me.

 

Then one day, the screen was replaced with sharp steel mesh.

Blood splat on the ground, from my hands and face.

Paradise, had left me.

 

More and more blood covered the now red-stained floor.

Blood from my futile attempts of freedom.

Paradise, was now just a nightmare.

 

Until one day, I decided 'whats the use'.

Thats when I slit my wrists over and over on my prisioner.

Paradise, had killed me.

 

 

 

 

© Dregnought 2006

So yea, the 'basic' structual life of someone who was once happy to depressed to suicide... Hope it never happens to anyone you know.

[Ipso Fracto Man]

I like the concept here. The chronological setup of your piece really sucked me in.

[SkylinesTurnstiles]

Hey

Thats really really good i love it so much.I'm gonna show my friend

[SkylinesTurnstiles]

She said it was amazing she likes it alot

[NKP]

Yeah dreg its awsome i love it hun

[Dregnought]

Aws!!! Thankyou everyone! It means so much, really!

[Moon Goddess]

OMG !!!! I love it!! It's really deep, it has feeling it takes your heart captivates you. It's really awesome I love it. I'm speechless... It's amazing. Great Work!

[Dregnought]

... Thankyou MG!!! I love the reply

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

Go dreg its awesome babe!

[Dregnought]

Hehe thankyou so much darlz! *hugs*