xthe core enemyx Posted July 1, 2004 Share Posted July 1, 2004 'Torn' You told me that you hated me You made me sink You tore me to pieces and broke my heart From all the pain and the hate you placed upon me I have grown to be a stronger person You told my sister and me that we were nothing Ripped out our hearts and threw them away You were never there for the first 9 years of my life Then mother died and you suddenly appeared To kill me slowly with every tear I shed You pushed me to my breaking point Now I'm just a broken doll Shattered And you can't fix me Look at me, please tell me what you see Just a rag doll you can throw around All my limbs in different places I can't get out of this place I'm suffocating Now I'm stronger and you're dead You can't hear the voice inside my head that pushes me to live I thank you for hurting me and making me see My life was almost perfect Then it all came crashing down I may be happier now But my heart contains scars that will never heal And will forever more be Torn 'Dedicated to my so called 'father' that ripped me apart and made me hate myself. without him i wouldn't be as strong as I am today.' Link to comment
xthe core enemyx Posted July 1, 2004 Author Share Posted July 1, 2004 This actualy isn't a poem i wrote. my sister did. Link to comment
lunatic Posted July 1, 2004 Share Posted July 1, 2004 WOW What an amazing poem such feeling such conviction. All I can say is WOW!!! Tell your sister to keep up the good work. Hubman Link to comment
Fundamental Posted July 1, 2004 Share Posted July 1, 2004 Very deep... I like it. It's really good. Link to comment
Stinkweed Posted July 1, 2004 Share Posted July 1, 2004 Very good. It really expresses very deep feelings. I don't think I could write that good ever. Your sister receives my standing ovation. Link to comment
XxBury me DeepxX Posted July 2, 2004 Share Posted July 2, 2004 Thank you all. and thanks krissy for posting my poem. Link to comment
ShySoul Posted July 2, 2004 Share Posted July 2, 2004 Great poem. I could really feel the emotion and anger behind it. Link to comment
i_hate_the_world47 Posted July 4, 2004 Share Posted July 4, 2004 Bury me deep Your poem was wonderful.Alot of thought and effort went into it u can tell =D> The core enemy I read you poem it was called pieces.It was the best poem i hve read in a long time.Excellent =D> Meagan Link to comment
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