jaiva Posted September 5, 2006 Share Posted September 5, 2006 Many sights and many sounds Many hope that I'll be found A collage of words that swirl in me I just wish they'd let me free The fear the insecurities The tears and the enmities I've been abused physically, mentally and sexually Oh I how I wish I could be free From the thoughts and emotions that control my mind That keep me from sharing and letting the world know me Jaiva Link to comment
yeawutever Posted September 5, 2006 Share Posted September 5, 2006 Great poem, keep writing!!!!!!!! That's a way to release all your emotions you're feeling right now. Link to comment
vandgsmom Posted September 6, 2006 Share Posted September 6, 2006 Cathartic and beautiful all at the same time. Link to comment
jaiva Posted September 6, 2006 Author Share Posted September 6, 2006 Thank you very much. Jaiva Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted September 6, 2006 Share Posted September 6, 2006 Thats amazing. I'm sorry you had to go through that but at least you have found a way to put your emotions into words which always helps you understand! Great Job! Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted September 6, 2006 Share Posted September 6, 2006 exposing and beautiful. i know that feeling. when you wish you could release all insecurities, secrets and experiences in a bid to be free from it all. i really liked your poem Link to comment
jaiva Posted September 6, 2006 Author Share Posted September 6, 2006 Well I look at my life as an example for those who will and have experienced the same things that I have. By continuing to succeed and strive for more success I am in a way showing that it can be done. You can have life after death, in some way. Thank you all for reading. Jaiva Link to comment
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