I know

[NKP]

I am crazy

I know

I am a loser

I know

I am a freak

I know

I am mental

I know

I am cranky

I know

I am weak

I know

So no need to remind me

I already know

 

 

DONT TELL ME

Don't tell me that you understand, don't tell me that you know

Don't tell me that I will survive, how I will surely grow.

Don't tell me this is just a test, that I am truly blessed

That I am chosen for this task, apart from all the rest.

Don't come at me with answers that can only come from me

Don't tell me how my grief will pass, that I will soon be free.

Don't stand in pious judgement of the bonds I must untie

Don't tell me how to suffer, don't tell me how to cry.

My life is filled with selfishness, my pain is all I see

But I need you, I need your love

Unconditionally.

Accept me in my ups and downs, I need someone to share.

Just hold my hand, and let me cry and say

"My friend, I care."

[NKP]

Tonight I'll pray,

Hoping never to awake,

Hoping to vanish from this grief,

Hoping to get some relief.

I'll sit in darkness,

Crying tears I've been holding in,

You can tell me it will be okay,

But I'm slipping away.

No one will care,

No one will notice,

No one can help me,

So I'm ending it right here.

Never again will you see my face,

Cause all I've lived was a great big disgrace.

But I believe I will be free,

Flying in the sky; way up high.

So I'm ending the pain,

I'm ending the tears,

I'm ending everything,

After all these years.

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

I liked all three they were all really good! I espeacially loved the second one and i see my own life through it! I hope the last one isnt true because you are precious and people do love you! Keep writing its awesum!

[Daddy Bear]

you write the saddest poems i've ever read. they always remind me that no matter how down i get, there's somebody who's feeling worse.

 

i love this line: "Don't stand in pious judgement of the bonds I must untie"

 

very inspired.

 

but i do worry about you.

[nottoogreen]

You are productive and I care!

[yeawutever]

Off course we care about you, we're your family!!!!!!!