Daddy Bear Posted July 31, 2006 Share Posted July 31, 2006 a heartsick and sad semi-lunatic who had twice cut his throat on his rhetoric did pray for deliverance from a godawful limerence in an equally godawful limerick. though he knew this attempt was in vain and regret would forevermore reign, he composed nonetheless for his heart was a mess and each line was pumped out by the pain. here is one inescapable moral: mind your words, whether written or oral! though emotions may storm, keep it simple and warm or be shunned by the gender clitoral. ~fin~ Link to comment
yeawutever Posted July 31, 2006 Share Posted July 31, 2006 Great poem and good use of imagination!!!!!!!1 Link to comment
Steven1607307306 Posted August 12, 2006 Share Posted August 12, 2006 Not bad, not bad at all. I think it's very imaginative. I want to read more, write another please! Link to comment
Daddy Bear Posted August 12, 2006 Author Share Posted August 12, 2006 thanks, Steven. i just posted another one, although it's admittedly a little freaky: Link to comment
doyathink Posted August 12, 2006 Share Posted August 12, 2006 Great poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!very majative! Link to comment
yeawutever Posted August 12, 2006 Share Posted August 12, 2006 Great poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!very majative! I see you're using my style now LOL!!!!!!!! Link to comment
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