New Tricks For Old Dogs

[Daddy Bear]

a heartsick and sad semi-lunatic

who had twice cut his throat on his rhetoric

did pray for deliverance

from a godawful limerence

in an equally godawful limerick.

 

though he knew this attempt was in vain

and regret would forevermore reign,

he composed nonetheless

for his heart was a mess

and each line was pumped out by the pain.

 

here is one inescapable moral:

mind your words, whether written or oral!

though emotions may storm,

keep it simple and warm

or be shunned by the gender clitoral.

 

~fin~

[yeawutever]

Great poem and good use of imagination!!!!!!!1

[Steven1607307306]

Not bad, not bad at all. I think it's very imaginative. I want to read more, write another please!

[Daddy Bear]

thanks, Steven. i just posted another one, although it's admittedly a little freaky:

 

 

[doyathink]

Great poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!very majative!

[yeawutever]

Great poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!very majative!

 

I see you're using my style now LOL!!!!!!!!