Daddy Bear Posted April 24, 2006 Share Posted April 24, 2006 for those who know... you will see me you will see me here or there there is no hope even in suicide the best of me has gone the courage to give all the body will live on as it wishes but the soul will have no part for i have slain it gray eyes and cold tomorrow hands washed in eternal silence a trail of blood to the opening of hell where i threw my dead soul and my debt was repaid but hey, i still have my sense of humor Link to comment
AwdreeHpburn Posted April 24, 2006 Share Posted April 24, 2006 what's emo?? Emotional? Well written and sad, a little scary but funny at the end, which I like. Link to comment
yeawutever Posted April 24, 2006 Share Posted April 24, 2006 a little scary but funny at the end, which I like. I don't really get the joke??? What really is funny there? , wondering Link to comment
Spugly Fuglet Posted April 24, 2006 Share Posted April 24, 2006 I like to the opening of hell where i threw my dead soul has a nice ring Link to comment
Daddy Bear Posted April 24, 2006 Author Share Posted April 24, 2006 thanks for all the feedback, all. Ailec, it's just satire. It wasn't meant to be really ROFLMAO funny, just pithy. Link to comment
AwdreeHpburn Posted May 4, 2006 Share Posted May 4, 2006 I was referring to the end line.... but hey, I still have my sense of humoUr ... like a satirical comment that makes you shake your head in sad, relatable exhaustion. Link to comment
Daddy Bear Posted May 4, 2006 Author Share Posted May 4, 2006 yet another bygone thread reanimated! this is my lucky day. pet, Sentenced To Life (a double play on words, btw) was a poetically licensed, exaggerated reflection of my darkest moment. haven't been there in many moons, and thanks for your concern. the overall theme was the comforting belief that even in my loneliest, fist-clenching hours of despair i still can crack wise and make people smile. i have always thought that if i ever lose my sense of humor i'll probably croak, so i try to keep it exercised... Tau_ree_sauw, that is juust the reacution i was houping for. thank U for your comment(s). Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted May 6, 2006 Share Posted May 6, 2006 Im gald you still have your sense of humour. So many people loose it these days to try and "fit in". Link to comment
SxcLady Posted May 6, 2006 Share Posted May 6, 2006 Nicely Written!!! So your good use in all areas are you??? Link to comment
Daddy Bear Posted May 6, 2006 Author Share Posted May 6, 2006 Nicely Written!!! So your good use in all areas are you???pfff! who, me? who told you THAT lie? i'm a TERRIBLE sketch artist. Link to comment
SxcLady Posted May 6, 2006 Share Posted May 6, 2006 Gee you still got it good ... Can you sing too? Link to comment
Daddy Bear Posted May 6, 2006 Author Share Posted May 6, 2006 you're gonna make me sound conceited! i don't need any help with that! but i was a singer in a cheesy rock band, and bion a choir boy in the Episcopal church Link to comment
SxcLady Posted May 6, 2006 Share Posted May 6, 2006 OMG ... LOL. Grrr can i have some of your talents??? Jks. TaTa Love SL. Link to comment
Daddy Bear Posted May 6, 2006 Author Share Posted May 6, 2006 lol Sxc... you don't need any of my talents, from what i've read you have plenty of your own! Link to comment
Daddy Bear Posted May 7, 2006 Author Share Posted May 7, 2006 don't make me quote your posts! they are a matter of public record, you know. (don't worry Sxc, i won't mention the PM about your orgy with the seven dwarfs) oops Link to comment
SxcLady Posted May 7, 2006 Share Posted May 7, 2006 You... Seven dwarfs LOL Yeh right i never seen the pm with the orgy and the seven dwarfs. Show me. And what posts would you quote??? Link to comment
Daddy Bear Posted May 7, 2006 Author Share Posted May 7, 2006 ok, you got me. i have no evidence of anything. i kid because i luv. i really just wanted to get the harsh spotlight off of me and turn it around on you. not a bad job, huh? Link to comment
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