justagirl Posted September 15, 2004 Share Posted September 15, 2004 Staring out over the hill past the people, trees and sounds Remembering long conversations and warm happiness I once found. The library and past behind me and the horizon and future lying ahead Everything that once was wonderful is now cast aside and dead The telephone ringing fills my body with hope and undying pain Knowing it won't be your number on the screen, it just isn't the same Waking up in the morning missing the laughter and sound of your voice Knowing that all this hurt and emptiness was caused by your choice The people on the phone smile the way I once did Sharing stories, warmth and giddiness like high school kids Butterflies fly past my head, they have forever left my tummy Missing the feelings you gave me that made me always so sunny Remembering the fun we had and all the promises that were spoken Knowing the ones that meant the most are now in pieces and broken Thinking of what life could have been like if we had kept in touch The life would have been the fantasy I needed, so very much Staring out over the campus as the telephone rings away Knowing the screen won't ever read, "Your dreams come true today." Justagirl I always have too much time to think while doing my homework in the car between classes...but I suppose it is a good thing Link to comment
jennifermlaw Posted September 15, 2004 Share Posted September 15, 2004 this is a really good poem. sorry about your relationship. I hope better days are ahead! Link to comment
i_hate_the_world47 Posted September 15, 2004 Share Posted September 15, 2004 wow,wonderful poem.Sorry your relationship was bad,better times are ahead.I assure you. ~Meagan~ Link to comment
Gauchori Posted September 15, 2004 Share Posted September 15, 2004 Great poem justagirl. Very... sad in a way but happy that you got to express your fillings. Umm... I'm sorry about your relationship, and I hope everything comes out how you wanted and full of happiness in the end. Take care and pm me any time you want if you just want to talk. Cya 8) Link to comment
leah_mac Posted September 15, 2004 Share Posted September 15, 2004 awsome poem!..im sorry about your realitionship too=( get well soon! Link to comment
EmptySoul Posted September 18, 2004 Share Posted September 18, 2004 Good job. I can relate. I hope you'll be able to get over this whole thing Thanks for writing. Empty Link to comment
behind_these_eyes Posted September 19, 2004 Share Posted September 19, 2004 that was really well written. great job. Link to comment
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