Dagless Posted August 18, 2009 Share Posted August 18, 2009 I saw someone who looked like you today I tried not to stare but I couldn’t look away Her eyes were like yours and the way she wore her hair I wonder what she thought when she saw me standing there I tried to turn away but my muscles just froze And as I tried to shut my eyes, they just wouldn’t close My heart kicked up feeling that I just couldn't trace As she walked right past me and I looked at her face.... I thought I saw you today but it was just the way she wore her hair And I realize these days I just see you everywhere…….. 1 Link to comment
Di_ya2009 Posted August 18, 2009 Share Posted August 18, 2009 That's very well written. Link to comment
Dagless Posted August 18, 2009 Author Share Posted August 18, 2009 Thanks guys, it's one of those poems that's been rattling around my head for a week. It's actually about an experience I had walking through a supermarket one afternoon. Link to comment
indierockgrl Posted August 18, 2009 Share Posted August 18, 2009 you already know how i feel......... hugs to you........ Link to comment
EQD Posted August 18, 2009 Share Posted August 18, 2009 oh my god... this is an amazing poem. i'm saving it if you dont mind. bravo! Link to comment
Dagless Posted August 18, 2009 Author Share Posted August 18, 2009 you already know how i feel......... hugs to you........ Hugs to you to indie (((hugs))) oh my god... this is an amazing poem. i'm saving it if you dont mind. bravo! Wow, thanks EqD. Yes by all means save it if you like. Link to comment
EQD Posted August 18, 2009 Share Posted August 18, 2009 i vote this as my favorite poem ever posted on ENA Link to comment
Purusha Posted August 18, 2009 Share Posted August 18, 2009 Lovely poem! It reminds me of the rod stewart song 'you are everything' - I love that song, same sentiment. *sigh* Link to comment
raining.stars Posted August 22, 2009 Share Posted August 22, 2009 tis beautiful esp. the last line And I realize these days I just see you everywhere…….. Link to comment
Shadows Light Posted August 25, 2009 Share Posted August 25, 2009 Very very nice. Hit very close to home. thank-you. and aye... I will save this one, if you don't mind. Link to comment
tiredofvampires Posted August 26, 2009 Share Posted August 26, 2009 Another beauty from the wizard, the poet, the heart that knows so much...Dags. This is just wonderful. You have a gift for creating a pathway of lines, and bringing it to a climax of meaning at the end. I just love the build-up that comes to rest at those last lines. Bravo! And another... Link to comment
Dagless Posted August 26, 2009 Author Share Posted August 26, 2009 Thanks for all the lovely comments you guys. They all mean a lot to me and give me inspiration to pull my finger out and write some more. Link to comment
tiredofvampires Posted August 26, 2009 Share Posted August 26, 2009 Do it, do it! Share with us.... Link to comment
onewithbooks Posted August 27, 2009 Share Posted August 27, 2009 Thank you Dags, just thank you. Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted August 29, 2009 Share Posted August 29, 2009 Beautiful and touching. I love to come onto this section to just read sometimes. Its nice when you can find some peices that just speak to you, you know the feeling? I find that your writings always touch hearts. That at least someone always gets something extra from what your work. Often more then just the one person too. So thankyou not only for sharing this beautiful poem, but for all the times you hit too close to home. 1 Link to comment
Jeen Posted July 23, 2010 Share Posted July 23, 2010 It's beautiful but so sad "Dagless". Hugs. Link to comment
Shadows Light Posted August 17, 2010 Share Posted August 17, 2010 3] Love this poem. Again. I came back here today after a longggggg time away and was surprised to see this one at the top of the charts again. Brought a smile to my face because...... once again it hit home and touched me. Thanx. [/size] Link to comment
whes Posted August 17, 2010 Share Posted August 17, 2010 heartbreaking and beautifully genuine... thank you for this, Dagless. Link to comment
Dagless Posted August 17, 2010 Author Share Posted August 17, 2010 Wow, what a lovely surprise. I wasn't expecting people to be posting comments on this so long after I had written it. Thanks guys, all your coments mean a lot to me. Link to comment
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