Daddy Bear Posted February 23, 2008 Share Posted February 23, 2008 things that hurt us most are never those designed to kill the mind, it knows when to shut down but oh, no not with this heartache i know what comes next, i'm gonna put on my cobain clothes walk the streets for miles on feet that always point away from me i don't wanna eat i don't wanna sleep i don't wanna breathe i don't wanna watch the tv i don't want to get undressed i don't want to see my chest the scar that runs accross my heart mom thinks it's from jumping over fences i don't want to feed my cat i don't want to wear my hat i don't want to put on socks will not eat them with a fox don't you make me laugh now, dammit the sound will hurt your ears and make you cry i don't wanna live i don't wanna live i don't wanna live i don't wanna live so why why why is it i don't wanna die Link to comment
HellFrost666 Posted February 23, 2008 Share Posted February 23, 2008 Awww. Go cut yourself now. Kidding. Good one SB. Link to comment
tiredofvampires Posted February 23, 2008 Share Posted February 23, 2008 Boy, do I know the feeling. And I don't wanna water my aloe plants. But they rely on me, and when I do nurture them, they are thick and juicy and medicinal. There are there for me when I am there for them. I know that's totally besides the point. Great, as always. The end packs such a punch. Link to comment
Daddy Bear Posted February 23, 2008 Author Share Posted February 23, 2008 But they rely on me, and when I do nurture them, they are thick and juicy and medicinal. They are there for me when I am there for them. My God, you're right. I'm a 24-karat bastard for not giving my 'aloe plant' the care it deserves. Oh, the horrible, horrible shame I feel now... Link to comment
Portage Posted February 23, 2008 Share Posted February 23, 2008 goose bumpy as per usual. Thx again for sharing SB ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, i can relate. Link to comment
MorbidMetalHead87 Posted February 23, 2008 Share Posted February 23, 2008 "things that hurt us most are never those designed to kill" I like those two lines the most, Because they are so true. But the whole poem Is good you know Thanks for shareing. Link to comment
brando Posted February 23, 2008 Share Posted February 23, 2008 Love the "cobain clothes" Link to comment
tiredofvampires Posted February 23, 2008 Share Posted February 23, 2008 My God, you're right. I'm a 24-karat bastard for not giving my 'aloe plant' the care it deserves. Oh, the horrible, horrible shame I feel now... But those plants are very forgiving, you know....at midnight, with a watering can, I atone. And then, forgive you "inner aloe plant", too. And, I also love the lines: "things that hurt us most are never those designed to kill" Sooo true. Standout title, too, btw. Link to comment
CallingAllAngels Posted February 27, 2008 Share Posted February 27, 2008 i don't wanna eat i don't wanna sleep i don't wanna breathe i don't wanna watch the tv The only thing I did was breathe, and that's only because my body did it for me automatically. As always, great job SB. ~Allie Link to comment
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