DeviantOne Posted September 19, 2006 Share Posted September 19, 2006 Why did u leave me, Why did u die. As I sit here and think of you, It makes me cry. You where a wonderful person, A beautiful soul I know now you're in a better place But I can't let go In the last year of your life I missed you so dam much Even though you where there in front of me You where already gone He stole you from me Which wasn't fair I didn't get enough time To say goodbye When you really did die It was a relief Because now you're not in pain You're in peace All I hear Is the song they played The one I chose "This Old Love" will never die I miss you Forever and a day You will never fade from my memory's And I will always love you… Grandad Link to comment
Entomon Posted September 19, 2006 Share Posted September 19, 2006 Beautiful. I never knew my paternal grandfather but I spent the first fifteen years of my life adoring my maternal grandfather. Bottle those memories up and hold them close. Link to comment
yeawutever Posted September 19, 2006 Share Posted September 19, 2006 I like it, nice job on it!!!!!!!!! Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted September 20, 2006 Share Posted September 20, 2006 Thats so good! I espeacially liked the very first few lines... It draws people in when you have a great beginning like that. Great work. Link to comment
Ms. Babydoll Posted September 21, 2006 Share Posted September 21, 2006 Aww that is a very sweet and sad poem, I could almost feel your pain. Beautiful work! Link to comment
keef Posted September 21, 2006 Share Posted September 21, 2006 i think i should think about that Link to comment
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