NKP Posted August 12, 2006 Share Posted August 12, 2006 You left me all alone You gaved up the fight You didnt show how you felt Until it was to late I thank you for that I only have good memories of you Thats the way i like it I am fighting To live and be happy And not let myself go like you Its time for me to say goodbye i dont want to but i need too Daddy I'd have chosen you to be my dad once more. Even if it meant losing you again, It's worth all the tears in the world. You were my sunshine when skieswere gray. I loved you and honored you You took all my tears away. I was happy to be with you, Proud to be your little girl. Sometimes we would argue, But to me you meant the world. Your love was always pure; You treated me as your own. Your time seemed all too short and I feel so alone. What can I take from this? My heart is completely crushed. But nothing loved is ever lost - And you are loved so much. I believe in happiness, though I never feel it. I believe in the stars, though I never get my wish. I believe in God, though I've never heard him. I believe in my future, though I don't know where it's headed. I believe in my friends, though they lie. I believe in love, though I don't know what it is. I believe in life, though I die Link to comment
nottoogreen Posted August 12, 2006 Share Posted August 12, 2006 Lovely poem kita. I believe in the stars, though I never get my wish. I believe in God, though I've never heard him. I believe in my future, though I don't know where it's headed. I believe in my friends, though they lie. I believe in love, though I don't know what it is. I believe in life, though I die. As ever, I feel with you and miss my dad too. You make very mature choices now. Keep your hope, be wise, your future is your making now! Link to comment
Q10 Posted August 12, 2006 Share Posted August 12, 2006 Kitaaa!!! IMO this is seriously one of your best poems!!! verrry nice.. Link to comment
coollady1957 Posted August 12, 2006 Share Posted August 12, 2006 Great poem Kita !!,, I know you miss your daddy a lot ! I feel you are truly coming to a better acceptance of his loss . Stay strong and determined young lady. take care ! Link to comment
yeawutever Posted August 12, 2006 Share Posted August 12, 2006 Coollllllllllll, your peom sure rocks!!!!!!!!! Thumbs UP!!! Link to comment
NKP Posted August 13, 2006 Author Share Posted August 13, 2006 Thank you everyone i am really glad you liked them Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted August 13, 2006 Share Posted August 13, 2006 Kita you really do have talent they were amazing! Im really sorry your hurting at the moment but i know you have a great future ahead of you you will move on although you will never forget! Keep up the great work! Link to comment
lil_baby_girl Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 this are great peoms, i have a friend that lost here dady to and its sad and im sorry ur hurting insid but things will get better u have a great future ahead of you, u are a great person Link to comment
melrich Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 Great poems Kita. Your dad would be very proud of you. Link to comment
NKP Posted August 16, 2006 Author Share Posted August 16, 2006 Thanks everyone, yous all rock Link to comment
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