blueangel Posted May 24, 2006 Share Posted May 24, 2006 I can't stand knowing you're still out there After everything that's happened I still can't seem to see What's keeping us from being you and me So long ago seems all of it Yet you found my door once more My feelings are hallow, I'm scared of everything Unsure Not a hallucination You are really there in my mind I miss how we cuddled And played mischievelously all the time Something just about you We just keep hurting each other Something about me too I'm always talking to you And I"m always talking to you As it's killing me inside I want to wring your neck I want this love to die But there is A bond so strong That is can't keep us From carrying on And though I know You are so far away I bet you didn't know I still think of you everyday Cuz I still stand you Though I don 't even want to try I want to leave it your frozen love behind Because you don't even want me You've already proven that And all I am now is angry You're gone and that's a fact. Can I win you back? So long so subltly I tried You changed me in ways Ways from others that wont hide I'm messy, everywhere, full of love Just cant care About anything alse but you I guess that's what heartbreak Has put me through. I can't stand this Though I've tried You are always In me Inside I can't even write It's all haunting me You just could melt me Nobody else can beat What's between you And me. They've tried They've faltered You still thrive It's always It's never In my life. Daydreams and nightmares When will they fade away Of all the things that's scaring me The worst has yet to go away... Link to comment
Doctor Smurf Posted May 24, 2006 Share Posted May 24, 2006 Nice poem, very scary considering my name is... Dan Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted May 24, 2006 Share Posted May 24, 2006 I really liked your poem, it has a strong ending that almost binds the entire poem. i thought it was really powerful.. i like the structure.. eratic. i dont know whether thats symbolic or how it turned out, but youve got style. i like it. x*smiles muchly*x Link to comment
yeawutever Posted July 11, 2006 Share Posted July 11, 2006 Very talented for a 15 year-old, the phrasing sure is creative!!!!!!!! Link to comment
blueangel Posted July 13, 2006 Author Share Posted July 13, 2006 heh. I feel he pulled me along. I don't even feel now Link to comment
shar82me Posted July 14, 2006 Share Posted July 14, 2006 kinda sad indeed... ______________________________________ more of me - link removed Link to comment
Spugly Fuglet Posted July 14, 2006 Share Posted July 14, 2006 I love you stuff, keep it coming Link to comment
blueangel Posted July 17, 2006 Author Share Posted July 17, 2006 lol I write half "donkey" poems online. I'm too afraid that if I post my good ones, they will be stolen! Link to comment
model_heather Posted July 23, 2006 Share Posted July 23, 2006 I love it. The guy who just ruined me is named Dan, Link to comment
yeawutever Posted July 24, 2006 Share Posted July 24, 2006 The guy who just ruined me is named Dan, Sorry to hear that, hope you kick him to the curb already, he wans't worth wasting your time nor energy on!!!!!!!!! Link to comment
model_heather Posted July 24, 2006 Share Posted July 24, 2006 He kicked me to the curb for the third time last night. Link to comment
yeawutever Posted July 24, 2006 Share Posted July 24, 2006 Then once again: he's not worth your time nor your youth!!!!!!!! You got plenty of years to go, don't let an idiot take them away!!!!!! Link to comment
blueangel Posted July 27, 2006 Author Share Posted July 27, 2006 I adore your poem! Hey, you're my age. Link to comment
blueangel Posted July 27, 2006 Author Share Posted July 27, 2006 He kicked me to the curb for the third time last night. Don't play his games. When someone kicks you, don't ever kick em back. Beat up their grandma instead! Link to comment
yeawutever Posted July 28, 2006 Share Posted July 28, 2006 Don't play his games. When someone kicks you, don't ever kick em back. Beat up their grandma instead! LOL, you sure have a good sense of humor!!!!!!!! Link to comment
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