musicguy Posted June 15, 2008 Share Posted June 15, 2008 Why is love so hard? Does it have to hurt so much? Your lips against mine, feeling the tranquility of your touch. Leaving a trail, so scarred and shattered, only waiting for someone to help me pick up the pieces. There's this empty feeling, left inside, self-inflicting, Can someone wipe my tears and take the pain away? I want to feel your arms around me, taking me into your utopia. If only my heart could talk, this is what it would say. So many intimate moments, tangled in a web of various emotions, yet it still remains inside me to go through the rollercoaster it calls love. Musicguy © June/2008 1 Link to comment
Brittanyxvx Posted June 15, 2008 Share Posted June 15, 2008 It's really good. I got lost on the word ''utopia.'' Aside from that it's smoothe. Link to comment
itsallgrand Posted June 15, 2008 Share Posted June 15, 2008 Guy, are these songs? I'd love to hear some of your music sometime if you have some of it up online. Keep going. Your stuff is such a pleasure. Link to comment
musicguy Posted June 15, 2008 Author Share Posted June 15, 2008 Guy, are these songs? I'd love to hear some of your music sometime if you have some of it up online. Keep going. Your stuff is such a pleasure. these aren't songs, just random topics I think about. Link to comment
CallingAllAngels Posted June 23, 2008 Share Posted June 23, 2008 Great poem MG... You should put some of your poetry to music. This one is exceptional. ~Allie Link to comment
musicguy Posted June 23, 2008 Author Share Posted June 23, 2008 I do have songs written...a lot of them Link to comment
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