still hurting Posted August 20, 2007 Share Posted August 20, 2007 How much longer can I mask this pain? I am tired of faking this smile. How much longer will it rain? This storm has been lingering for quite a while. How much more can I take? I am so sick of holding back tears. How much more before I break? I can't do this for another six years. How much longer can I play this game, Hiding my anxiety and fears? How much longer will I have to live in shame, Drenching my pillow each night with tears? How much more do you want from me? I have nothing left to give. How much more before you'll let me be? You've already robbed me of my will to live. 1 Link to comment
Lana0120 Posted August 20, 2007 Share Posted August 20, 2007 That's a great poem Still Hurting. Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted August 21, 2007 Share Posted August 21, 2007 Thatsounds so truthful, like it really came from the heart. How much longer can I play this game, Hiding my anxiety and fears? How much longer will I have to live in shame, Drenching my pillow each night with tears? That verse said it all. Like you were writing the pages of my heart. Link to comment
still hurting Posted August 22, 2007 Author Share Posted August 22, 2007 I'm glad you liked it. Thank you. Link to comment
indigo_scar Posted August 28, 2007 Share Posted August 28, 2007 I've just commented on another of your poems aswell- I just wanna say you're good. Real good. Link to comment
CallingAllAngels Posted March 1, 2008 Share Posted March 1, 2008 really powerful words... ~Allie Link to comment
Brittanyxvx Posted June 15, 2008 Share Posted June 15, 2008 Excellent flow. Kudos. Intricate words. Very deep. Link to comment
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