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  1. fallingisfun
    Thanks, and I don't usually write rhyming poetry. That's mostly what I post in here because most of the readers on this forum are into the rhyming thing.
  2. fallingisfun
    Thanks hubman.
  3. fallingisfun
    Thanks again!
  4. fallingisfun
    Thanks everyone!
  5. fallingisfun
    Electric pulses Lightening bolts Atoms spinning Aimlessly, Hop, jump, twist Like fireworks Exploding Millions of colorful Ions work so hard To keep my physics In tact, In fact Even my blanket Is anxious Sending messages Retrieve, release Impulses, convulsing so methodical so harmonious Destructive with instruction Memory banks Flooded with worry Regret, hurrying To get to the Bottom or top of it And all I'm doing is Trying to get some sleep
  6. fallingisfun
    Thanks everyone!
  7. fallingisfun
    Thanks everyone!
  8. fallingisfun
    Thank you!
  9. fallingisfun
    And it is a poem. Just because it doesn't rhyme or contain literary techniques doesn't mean it isn't a poem. There are things that make poems sound better than others, or flow better than others, but just because a particular piece doesn't have traditional tools in it does not mean it is not a poem. As far as the one post thing, it does apply to poems as well. I tried to post two today and it wouldn't let me.
  10. fallingisfun
    Factual falsities and truth misconstrued The needy get greedy, the smart get confused Sins are forgiven to be done once more Waves of impatience crash into lusts' shore Hearing and feeling, the smell of the past Wonder and yearning, time trickles so fast Climbing mountains and falling from crags Empty souls fill our cumbersome bags Heaven's gates guide you to hell's inferno War and death is a reality Earth show Grow to shrink, and be one with the ground Yelling to fight contradicting sounds Conquer the universe, complicate Earth Living to die, dying to give birth Sudden and slow, the wheels get turned Freezing, so cold that it creates a burn Time is forsaken, greed comes for free Lives get taken, from seed comes a tree Lovers get lost, storms violently rage Hatred corrupts, here on Earth's stage
  11. fallingisfun
    I have a feeling I'll be posting plenty of poems in here. Thanks for the support.
  12. fallingisfun
    thanks everyone, again! Wow, that made me feel good.
  13. fallingisfun
    Edge of 6 is right. Cliche and rhymes get eaten alive with true critiquing.
  14. fallingisfun
    Thanks under, and everyone else who posted, thanks again.
  15. fallingisfun
    Thanks everybody.
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