Flipp Posted February 20, 2019 Share Posted February 20, 2019 There has to be more people than me that's processing this heartache in writing! Are you? Post here! I'd like to hear it! Link to comment
Flipp Posted February 20, 2019 Author Share Posted February 20, 2019 I'll start! They say Don't wait They say Be your own happiness But it's a lonesome happiness There are more fish They say Nicer, tastier, better fish But I don't want the pretty fish It's not the end of the world They say He was just one part But his world was the one that was ours I don't wait But I long I know about the fish But I'm not fishing It was the end of the world Our world is dead And i hate it Link to comment
Clio Posted February 20, 2019 Share Posted February 20, 2019 An ode to my ex Mirror, mirror on the wall Who is the loser in this all? Your true colors at last showed What you ll reap is what you sowed Bullet dodged after all Holding grudges? Not at all 😜 Link to comment
Flipp Posted February 20, 2019 Author Share Posted February 20, 2019 An ode to my ex Mirror, mirror on the wall Who is the loser in this all? Your true colors at last showed What you ll reap is what you sowed Bullet dodged after all Holding grudges? Not at all 😜 I like it 😂 Link to comment
greendots Posted February 21, 2019 Share Posted February 21, 2019 I like Clio's poem, too! Link to comment
limichelle Posted February 21, 2019 Share Posted February 21, 2019 I wrote this poem after my ex of eleven years and I split. I’m in a much better place four years later. This poem just reflects on how I felt at the time. Why the sad brown eyes plastered on my face They say one day I won’t feel the pain The empty hole you gave When you went away They say time will heal all wounds Don’t they know it’s all the same tunes As my skies seem to be always grey When I’m all alone I think of you most Your eyes and laughter Still haunt my mind They say I’ll find someone new Won’t be thinking of you anymore If that’s the case Where does the love go? They may say a lot of things It’s just they don’t really know How hard it is to let you go Link to comment
MasterPo Posted November 4, 2019 Share Posted November 4, 2019 I like it. "When I'm all alone I think of you most". LOL wow. Yeah, raw truth. I've never written poetry so don't know the gift, the uniqueness that says all in one or two phrases. I'll work on it. What got me through for the longest time was a type of poetry - songs if you will. One comes to mind 'slow dancing in a burning room'. Damn, it was my salve and napalm at the same time. Link to comment
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