This broken shattered doll...

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

Tension rising,

Building up,

Hunger killing,

Pain errupts.

 

Looking around,

Finding food,

Looking like the homeless,

Nothing can break this mood.

 

Devouring all i can find,

Feeling worse,

Not so hungry,

Once again i give into the curse.

 

Shove those fingers,

Down your throat,

Further further,

Get rid of the coat.

 

Up comes all the pain i feel,

Nothing more then the food i steel,

Making sure to throw up more then that last meal,

Who said this wasn't such a big deal.

 

Wanting out,

No more pain,

Get me out of this,

Life of shame.

 

Sorry lord,

What have i become?

Nothing more then,

Stupid scum.

 

The blade i fear,

Has taken control,

Broken lives many tears,

Purging more to show my dear,

 

I ain't so perfect.

Not so great,

Anit your angel,

Ain't your mate.

 

You can't fix me,

I lost control,

Maybe this is the end,

To this broken shattered soul...

 

I changed it to soul but i can't change the title lol..

[yeawutever]

Great poem, you rock!!!!!!!

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

Thanks ailec Its always a boost to get your comment

[NKP]

Yeah its great, i loved it, and i can relate to it abit

[m_darko]

Rozz

 

.....

 

Something appealing about this. My heart, whats left, feels for you. But hey, theres always hope...so I hear.

 

G-DAY

[m_darko]

Ohh,

 

Damn your eyes.

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

lolz thanks so much. I guess poetry gets how i feel out even if its just a lil bit. It means alot getting comments so thanks.