All I need's a trigger.

[EmptySoul]

I hear the song

I associate with suicide

I knew it'd trigger me

But I play it anyway

Just to have some feeling

So slit my throat and call me a fake

I want to be done

I just can't function anymore

I'm so da** tired of breaking

They told lies when I needed them most

I'm dying for truth when it'll kill me

(The pills were to kill yesterday

The alcohol to kill tomorrow.)

 

("Car Underwater" by Armor For Sleep: link removed )

 

-E.

[yeawutever]

Hopefully you're not really thinking of commiting suicide, if so then you need to seek counseling right away. Wonderful poem by the way!!!!!!

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

Great poem, full of true emotions not just an altered version and i love that. But please if you gotta talk talk. Get it outa your system or keep writing anything. Just don't let go.

[EmptySoul]

I'm not going to commit suicide, as long as I'm writing it's okay...

 

-E.

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

Awesome Keep up the writing then cuz your great!