Magic_star829 Posted August 24, 2006 Share Posted August 24, 2006 My heart is hurting beyond words So much so that I cannot feel Cut my skin open with swords To let the center spill out of the peel I can never be loved for I am tainted, No one will see beyond what I did, No more the beauty you had painted, Accepting that loving me you forbid. I cannot blame you for how you think, I was a fool to believe in second chances, I will pray for you, a pretty lady in pink, For you to love and give your romances. Love S Link to comment
Gecko Posted August 24, 2006 Share Posted August 24, 2006 great poem, reminds me of the 'monster' or 'failure' who still has the full capacity to love. Link to comment
NKP Posted August 25, 2006 Share Posted August 25, 2006 yes i also love it, its really great, keep writting more Link to comment
Ms. Babydoll Posted August 26, 2006 Share Posted August 26, 2006 it's simple perfect, I adore it! Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted August 26, 2006 Share Posted August 26, 2006 quite impressive indeed, i like the ab style youve worked it well Link to comment
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