EmptySoul Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 I don't know why I thought it would be so easy I forgot the weight of reality Now I'm looking in the mirror thinking Bones, bones, bones Thinking, shouldn't I be happy? Thinking, god, I wish he was happy For a little bit, I could've swore I was okay I just keep forgetting Keep pretending That every part of me isn't broken and Diseased Twisted and Bleeding I tried to forget myself But I'm still here And I'm still dying. -E. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rose2summer Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 That's a beautiful poem emptysoul, I can see that you are hurting greatly though. Have you tried keeping a journal about your emotions, because I can see your gradual development of pain in that poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmptySoul Posted August 15, 2006 Author Share Posted August 15, 2006 Thanks for replying. I keep a journal on xanga. -E. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted August 16, 2006 Share Posted August 16, 2006 Lovable poem there, is it about someone in particular by the way? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted August 17, 2006 Share Posted August 17, 2006 I really like it! I can relate to it and i like that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daddy Bear Posted August 17, 2006 Share Posted August 17, 2006 oh man, do i remember feeling just like that not too long ago! except for the "he" part, i mean. very, very well expressed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmptySoul Posted August 19, 2006 Author Share Posted August 19, 2006 The poem was just about me, and the 'he' is someone I love. -E. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted August 19, 2006 Share Posted August 19, 2006 denial - half the time its the best emotion going. (or atleast thats my form of "forgetting" i like your poetry. brave and raw. neva Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brando Posted August 19, 2006 Share Posted August 19, 2006 I forgot the weight of reality great line.... i can identify with the pain in this poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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