hazeleyed Posted July 2, 2006 Share Posted July 2, 2006 Sitting here as the rain pours outside The feeling of loneliness arises inside The urge to be held and kissed burns inside I remember the passion we once used to share How those hugs and cuddles lit up my eyes As I felt your heartbeat deep within me I looked up and saw the love deep in your eyes I felt your hot breath on my cheek as my heart raced I grew nervous but I knew I trusted you So that night I let myself go but failed to see The true side of who you really are In the coming days after that night you changed And stopped loving me the way you did It felt like my world had fallen apart Today as I wipe my tears away I knew you were meant to go far away. I just wish that you didn't leave the traces of pain inside me. Link to comment
yeawutever Posted July 2, 2006 Share Posted July 2, 2006 Well written poem there!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment
dpressedone89 Posted July 2, 2006 Share Posted July 2, 2006 agreed, very well written. beautiful poem filled with genuine emotion keep writing, the world will be a better place for it. -stitcheS Link to comment
mccarleighp Posted July 3, 2006 Share Posted July 3, 2006 thats really good you really should keep writing Link to comment
model_heather Posted July 24, 2006 Share Posted July 24, 2006 Your poems really hit the spot with me. I haven't read one yet that hasn't made me cry. Link to comment
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