Poem I wrote 4 the heartbroken.

[pimpcess]

This is a poem I wrote, just read the subject!.

My body starts to shake, my eyes start to leak,

As tears and tears just float down my cheek,

I opened up, I let down my guard,

Cupid shot me, and he shot me hard.

I remember so clearly, the first day we met,

I walked away, but you were hard to forget,

I thought it was fate, when we met again,

It went from there, and we became best friends,

A few months passed, we grew and grew,

We became an us, a me and you.

You were my life, my soul my destiny,

I opened up, you brought out the best in me.

I realise now, love is so blind,

I didn't want to see it, because you were hard to find,

You went behind my back, but I just couldn't see,

Coz I couldn't imagine life,Without a you and me,

I dwelled on the good, ignored all the bad,

I thought you were the best thing, that I ever had,

But you hurt me in ways, you'll never ever know,

I never ever thought, you'd make me feel this low,

I thought you were perfect, but thats the way it goes,

I now know your cons, so outweigh your pros,

I wish u could know, how torn I am inside,

I wish you could know, all the tears that I've cried,

The pain you've left me is like a cut,

It'll fade but the scar won't disappear,

So now I have to get on with life, get on without you here.

They say everything you go through, and you haven't died,

Only makes you a better person, and makes u stronger inside,

In future I'll be strong not easily affected,

My heart is tender, Im gonna protect it,

Now this is closure, Im saying goodbye,

Im movin on, no more will I cry,

All I'll do is try, I won't ask u why,

I'll just stride right on with my head held high...

[charmed]

Quite the littl poet Pimp !!!!

 

Nice - I like it

[optimistic]

Wow pimpy...

 

you have no idea how much I can relate to that....I feel like I could have wrtten it..

 

I wrote somehting so similar the other day.. but it don't rhyme and sounds poo.. it did make me feel better though...

 

Optimistic

[pimpcess]

Thanx 4 the positive feedback people Im so glad u like it and can relate to it that makes me happpppyyyyyy!!

Pimpy- cool name.

[optimistic]

Here's some of mine since we're in a poemy mood...

 

I still can't help but cry, and wonder why,

you let go of such a love meant to be,

Every day I still try, to work out why

another chance for me, did never come by.

 

I now know that you suffered in silence, in pain,

I just wished you had opened your heart and cried

Now we both walk away in silence with no gain

There's no more time to be there by your side.

 

In my head there's place where I see your face,

In my heart there's a space where you live,

In my body, an empty and and baron place,

Is my soul that just wants you to forgive.

 

If you knew of the love, that I have inside,

that I still want only to shower upon you,

Then how can you be, the way that you are,

and be just like the way that you do?

 

And so now my love, you walk out of my life,

To start a new life in a brand new land,

Every bone in my body yearns you for my wife,

And you leave without my ring on your hand,

 

I know now how to be all you want me to be,

But fate for us has just made it too late,

I know now what to do to always love you,

but your destinys path has redirected you.

 

So I thankyou for being a part of my life,

And we did walk a long way together,

By taking for granted the things we love,

Meant we will not be together forever.

 

Remain please my friend, for as long as you live,

If I can't have your love or the light that you give,

I'd be blessed to know in your heart there's a place,

sometimes you can think of me with a smile on your face.

 

I will love you forever, you made a change my destiny,

But I no longer have you, like a dove I am free,

I will never forget you, or stop dreaming my dream,

One day we'll be together, an all winning team.

 

It's all a bi soppy though...

Col.

optimistic...

[charmed]

Well, since we are all at it - heres something of mine. It's a song, so it seems funny to me without the melody - but tell me what you think !!

 

Not The One For You

 

There's times in your life, you meet someone,

You're lookin around, but you can see no one else at all,

If feels like they're the one for you, yeah you feel it's true,

But your setting yourself for a fall

 

You let their disguise, cover up your eyes,

You really knew from the start, yeah it's no surprise,

You let em in, and now the pain begins,

Cause they're not the one for you.

 

You want it so bad, just a bit makes you glad,

You settle for less than you know you really could have,

It won't be long, till another song,

gets written for another one that makes you sad.

 

You should have know, you'd be all alone,

It would only be you that would be watching the phone,

You let em in, and now the pain begins,

Cause they're not the one for you.

 

But still you cannot let it go, even though you know,

that your reasons are so wrong.

Your hanging on, clutching onto straws,

And finding it a little hard to be so strong,

 

You know the rules, if you wanna play,

It's never stopped you before and ther'll be more again,

Let em in, open up your heart,

You'll find the pain will be back when the attraction starts,

But it's better than, having none at all,

To know you got it inside whenever she might call,

And you hope and dream, that it will stop some day,

And you'll find the one for you.

[faeriechyld]

Sitting by the side of the road in the middle of nowhere

Waiting for my prince charming to come

My life's as empty as a barren land

Just sitting by the side of the road with nowhere to run.

 

Sitting by the side of the road in the middle of nowhere

Watching life and love go slipping away

Can't keep running in the direction of the wind

Hoping I might get somewhere today

 

Sitting by the side of the road in the middle of nowhere

Thinking about all the lessons I have learned

Life keeps on going no matter the problems you may face

And the pain of love will always burn.

[winkie]

YOU ARE VERY TALENTED WITH THAT POEM. THANK YOU IT IS GOOD TO KNOW THAT OTHER PEOPLE HURT JUST LIKE ME.