Kurodashi Posted August 7, 2005 Share Posted August 7, 2005 Id love it if someone read or commented ^_^ Unrequited Dreams Her passion were the leaves branches of his shame conceives falling down like tears in streams creating a willow of final dreams Parting forever did the go underneath the lands of woe crying for what they never knew hiding within the branches grew pain and bittnerness naught resolved hath born this forest known and old turning with their death did see regret becoming history growing now with words untold the plants to which their love unfold but with this time did beauty grow from love to hate made sun to snow Closing eyes to walk the dark too blind to know the path they mark never had that hope been born in sadness is joy but now, is gone Link to comment
ComputerGuy Posted August 7, 2005 Share Posted August 7, 2005 Very nice poem, lots of emotion...wish I could write like that Link to comment
darkblue Posted August 15, 2005 Share Posted August 15, 2005 Amazing! I've read a lot of poetry on the site and I think you should be a more frequent writer if you can keep that standard. Well Done! Link to comment
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