dichotomy lobotomy

[waveseer]

both of us made promises we wanted to keep

but both of us broke them wanting to weep

 

both of us made declarations of how much we cared

but both of us acted like we were scared

 

both of us made the other one happy

but both of us treated the other one crappy

 

both of us felt some very strong feelings

but both of us from them were caught reeling

 

both of us gave it our best shot

but both of us jumped when the fire got too hot

 

both of us intended to learn from the other

but both of us realized together we'd smother

 

both of us wished for a different ending

but both of us were relieved of pretending

 

both of us made a choice to let go

but both of us have used the experience to grow

[Crazyaboutdogs]

Oh wow! That's very clever with the use of rhymes! Nicely done! I wish I could rep you for this.

[waveseer]

Thanks, CrazyAD, I'm so glad someone else enjoys the stuff that spills out of my head. lol

[Spondence]

both of us made promises we wanted to keep

but both of us broke them wanting to weep

 

both of us made declarations of how much we cared

but both of us acted like we were scared

 

both of us made the other one happy

but both of us treated the other one crappy

 

both of us felt some very strong feelings

but both of us from them were caught reeling

 

both of us gave it our best shot

but both of us jumped when the fire got too hot

 

both of us intended to learn from the other

but both of us realized together we'd smother

 

both of us wished for a different ending

but both of us were relieved of pretending

 

both of us made a choice to let go

but both of us have used the experience to grow

 

 

 

I really enjoyed this waveseer, thank you.

[waveseer]

I really enjoyed this waveseer, thank you.

 

You're welcome, Spondence, once I got over my fear of criticism and started posting poems as they come life got better for me.

[stingray]

Amazing poem! Does it help you heal personally? And how do you go about writing these poems?

[waveseer]

Amazing poem! Does it help you heal personally? And how do you go about writing these poems?

 

It does help me heal, very much I think. Sometimes I am releasing emotion, sometimes it's a chronicle, and others a memory. They just ooze out as I type them. I've learned not to edit, merely submit. lol