musicguy Posted February 26, 2008 Share Posted February 26, 2008 accross a thousands seas, through the most violent of storms, I would go the distance, just to be with you. When I look into your eyes, I see the heaven in your soul. When I kiss your lips, it's out of this world. a tranquil world, with just you and me in it. Your love flows from your heart to mine like a stream of affection, spreading quickly through out my body. Your voice soothes my ears with such sultry words the way you look at me captivates me and puts me in a state of euphoria. Loving you is the most wonderful to happen to me, loving you each day you see, In our own world, as happy as we can be, Musicguy©Feb. 2008 1 Link to comment
hosswhispra Posted February 26, 2008 Share Posted February 26, 2008 You're quite the romantic, MG. Great poem! Link to comment
musicguy Posted February 26, 2008 Author Share Posted February 26, 2008 You're quite the romantic, MG. Great poem! Indeed I am, always have been, always will be Link to comment
BiancaGonzalez Posted February 26, 2008 Share Posted February 26, 2008 why does this sound really familiar? i know i've heard/read it before...but good job nonetheless!! Link to comment
musicguy Posted February 26, 2008 Author Share Posted February 26, 2008 why does this sound really familiar? i know i've heard/read it before...but good job nonetheless!! I just thought of it right now Link to comment
CallingAllAngels Posted February 27, 2008 Share Posted February 27, 2008 Wow - I'm speechless. Loved it. ~Allie 1 Link to comment
musicguy Posted February 27, 2008 Author Share Posted February 27, 2008 aww! Allie, what made you speechless about it? Link to comment
CallingAllAngels Posted February 27, 2008 Share Posted February 27, 2008 It just drew me in like I was right there in the moment with someone... That's good poetry...when you can get lost in it... Link to comment
musicguy Posted February 27, 2008 Author Share Posted February 27, 2008 It makes you think, doesn't it? Link to comment
CallingAllAngels Posted February 27, 2008 Share Posted February 27, 2008 ^It made me think of someone from my long ago...thanks for the memory...it was bittersweet ;-) Link to comment
musicguy Posted February 27, 2008 Author Share Posted February 27, 2008 awww! you're welcome. When it comes to a poem like this one, it's either something I've remembered from my past love or something I want to feel in a future love Link to comment
CallingAllAngels Posted February 27, 2008 Share Posted February 27, 2008 When I read it....I was just GONE INTO THE PAST MAN...right there in the moment with that person...again...thank you for that ;-) Link to comment
musicguy Posted February 27, 2008 Author Share Posted February 27, 2008 you're very welcome Link to comment
HellFrost666 Posted February 27, 2008 Share Posted February 27, 2008 Wow MG, that was heavy... It's like a black metal love song. Link to comment
musicguy Posted February 27, 2008 Author Share Posted February 27, 2008 Wow MG, that was heavy... It's like a black metal love song. right on!!! Link to comment
browneyedgirl36 Posted February 27, 2008 Share Posted February 27, 2008 Hey MG, I think you should set this to music -- it would make a great song! Nicely done! Link to comment
musicguy Posted February 27, 2008 Author Share Posted February 27, 2008 Hey MG, I think you should set this to music -- it would make a great song! Nicely done! Thanks, I might do that Link to comment
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