Daddy Bear Posted February 22, 2008 Share Posted February 22, 2008 the words on the envelope cost her a breath "please do not open 'til after my death" inside was a note with a large and small X over verses in daddy's coarse handwritten text people leave us, it said and they don't leave much with us questions, they leave us they leave us with many holes we all must lose someone unless we had no one I lost my ever one but still had you, little one and didn't we have some kicks houses of popsicle sticks watching those kiddie flicks how they made my eyes roll mother's an angel bright and though I must join the light we'll sleep at your sides tonight you'll be the middle one baby, you must understand what you meant to us the product of hope and trust born in love's purity you were my everything you eased my suffering when you put our wedding rings on that chain that you wore and you must live on now live and be strong now we'll be there somehow as you pass on that legacy hand down our wedding bands and make sure they understand write something like this and keep it safe in a drawer and when daddy's poem had come to a close she wiped a last tear from the tip of her nose she felt a great joy when her babies were born and they all lived forever in subsequent form now, this is the meaning that everyone misses in the unbroken pattern of childhood's kisses regardless of who bore those children, my friends if you give them your love, then your life never ends. 1 Link to comment
amure Posted February 22, 2008 Share Posted February 22, 2008 thats heaps good, keep it up you got something going there Link to comment
karvala Posted February 22, 2008 Share Posted February 22, 2008 Masterful! Really good. Link to comment
CallingAllAngels Posted February 23, 2008 Share Posted February 23, 2008 Wow...wonderful SB...just wonderful. Link to comment
brando Posted February 23, 2008 Share Posted February 23, 2008 Your avatar is so fitting to the title of your poem. Link to comment
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