Daddy Bear Posted September 17, 2007 Share Posted September 17, 2007 It's been raining for so long Now you just can't believe it's true But your love lifts me to the sky And I will clear the clouds for you So lift up your eyes And you will see Lift up your eyes Look where you've taken me There's a glimmer in your eye The recognition tears my heart It's the hope that you and I Can tear the skies apart Well, lift up your chin And never doubt Lift up your chin And watch the sun come out I am just a mortal man But I am stronger than you know With your faith to give me flight I'll be your hero I'll lift up your soul Into that bright blue sunny day I'll lift up your soul, my love And we will fly away Link to comment
Daddy Bear Posted September 17, 2007 Author Share Posted September 17, 2007 Oh, no comments, huh? That figures. I wrote it for Britney Spears, and you people are all just jealous because she's gonna make me a star! *sob* You just don't understand! She works hard! And you just make FUN OF HER! She's had a tough life! She lost her hair, she had two kids and a husband who turned out to be a PLAYER! *sob* I HATE YOU! *choke* ALL FIFTEEN OF YOU! LEAVE BRITNEY ALONE!!! Link to comment
itsallgrand Posted September 17, 2007 Share Posted September 17, 2007 Hahaha. I liked it. It's a refreshing and sweet one. Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted September 18, 2007 Share Posted September 18, 2007 Haha you make me laugh somebloke It was a beautiful poem. It deserves all the comments in the world, But it really was a gorgeous poem. You are talented and someone is a a/going to be a very lucky girl. Link to comment
comfyshoes Posted September 18, 2007 Share Posted September 18, 2007 awww Blokey..... i love your poetry, you now that. if i left a comment on ever one you would just think i was blowing smoke up your whatever. i wish someone would write something like that for me. *sniff* Link to comment
TheFallenShadow Posted September 18, 2007 Share Posted September 18, 2007 Bloke very fine piece of writing. Link to comment
brando Posted September 19, 2007 Share Posted September 19, 2007 Nice job Bloke...although I am not to crazy about rhyming... but it is much much better than my last few Haikus....what was I thinking when i wrote those. ????? Link to comment
Miss Firecracker Posted September 19, 2007 Share Posted September 19, 2007 I wish I had that way with words, somebloke. Must come in handy when you are having the hard times. I wish I could write a poem about the way I feel right now. I wish there was some way you could feel what I feel and write one for me. LOL Link to comment
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