mermayd Posted February 10, 2003 Share Posted February 10, 2003 I walk aimlessly Alone in darkess In blackness Only myself as my guide. My mind is filled With confusion and anxiety Whirling with thoughts A tye-dyed swirl of feelings. My heart solid gold Now turns to a sparkling dust And the wind Carries me away. My soul, my spirit drifts off into the sea The waves pull me Through their roar and tumble. Then I think of you All is better, put together Yet I realize All was caused by you -written age 14 Link to comment
kamurj Posted February 10, 2003 Share Posted February 10, 2003 That was great! I loved it and i think you should keep writing. the stuff you write like this gets you more in tune with yourself, so its a great thing. i have trouble with talking to people with my feelings because of past events that have happened, so i learned to write. i write in a journal like how you write that no one sees. i feel like my feelings are protected. i envy you for being able to be so open about your feelings. it was a great poem and it really got me thinking. good luck! luv ya! Crystal Link to comment
bleeder Posted February 13, 2003 Share Posted February 13, 2003 Nice work Mermayd. Keep on going...you have that poetic flair in ya too! Link to comment
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