Read my poem!

[pimpcess]

This poem is slightly simple, it's just my feelings put down, what do you think?

 

When the world is just to tough to live in,

When I search my soul but find nothing within,

When everythings on my shoulders and I just wanna give in,

 

I look at you, and things aren't so bad,

You smile, and I realise what I have.

 

When I've got so many emotions that I get confused,

When life's battles overpower me, and I always lose,

When every little hope I have, seems to be refused,

 

Then I look to my future, and I see your face,

Then the world doesn't seem like such a bad place.

 

When the strain gets to much, And I fall to the floor,

When my hearts been abused, and my soul has been tore,

When I say to myself, 'I just can't take no more',

 

I look in your eyes, and the sadness dies,

And I realise how happy I am to be alive.

 

~Pimpcess~

[Jitrenda]

Hey there Pimpcess!

 

that is a pretty poem you have there. I can relate to that. I hope whoever you wrote it for, you will give it to. It's a really really good poem!

 

I like the fact that it rhymes, that's kudos.

 

Hope to see more poetry from you!

 

-jitrenda

[reborn]

Hi there Pimpcess,

Just wanted to let you know that I read your poem and loved it! You are a great writter girl! Who is the lucky person that inspired this? Well, he must be some lucky guy!

I have to go now, but just wanted to let you know this quicky. Everytime you feel down or deep emotions do write them down. This way your personal experiences can contribute to the world being a better place, as you will turn your pain into art you can share with others!

bye Pimpcess, keep writing!

-Reborn

[pimpcess]

Aww thankyou, everytime I feel something or get 'inspiration', I do write it down, hence why I have 100+ poems!!

 

Thanx again.

 

~Pimpcess~

[j-boe]

Here's my love poem. I just wrote it.

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When I look at you I only see dreams.

All I hear from my heart are screams.

 

For all that it's worth, I love you more than you know.

I love everything about you, from head to toe.

 

Our times have past, its come to an end.

I always wanted to sleep with your best friend.

 

You've lied to me for the last time.

This is going to be my last rhyme.

 

It's time to meet my backhand.

I'm going to hit you so hard and send you to the promise land.

 

I hope you enjoy my shoe in your ass.

Wow, the blood flow on my carpet has only surpassed.

 

Now that your life fads I only enjoy.

For this is the last relationship you'll ever destroy.

 

-j

[neva_black_n_white]

hey pimpcess.

i thought that was a great poem, im guessing this is relevant to you? if so they seem like they mean one hell of a lot to you hold on to them...or if not great poem anyway and i can so relate to it.

 

keep up the great work (your poems always seems to be gd)

 

~kel

[pimpcess]

Aww thankyou!!!