EmptySoul Posted November 20, 2006 Share Posted November 20, 2006 lifeless on the floor headphones blaring with screaming or sad accoustics depending on the day hands are shaking despite the numbness and i just can't bear the weight of my reflection pinching fat between my fingers scrutinizing every inch i used to think these scars were beauty now the appeal is gone oh, not quite oh no, never i just get the way they see it now it makes no sense why aren't we happy in this pointlessness? they all are... -Empty. Link to comment
yeawutever Posted November 21, 2006 Share Posted November 21, 2006 Nice poem there, thumbs up!!!!!!! Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted November 26, 2006 Share Posted November 26, 2006 Im impressed, i especially like the weight of my reflection pinching fat between my fingers scrutinizing every inch i used to think these scars were beauty now the appeal is gone thought that was pretty powerful. reflection is an annoying things. i look back and sometimes wonder how i came to one thought pattern or a certain conclusion. something you could once justify cant be justified anymore. if that isnt in context with the poem, sorry, just my random responce to it. i like it Link to comment
NKP Posted November 27, 2006 Share Posted November 27, 2006 Yeah i love it, its great, good work hun Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted November 27, 2006 Share Posted November 27, 2006 I'm with the other fab poem. I love it lots Also you spoke well of the issue! Link to comment
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