southerngirl Posted October 1, 2006 Share Posted October 1, 2006 I wrote this when I was a heart broken 15 year old girl... I dont feel this way anymore =) I did think I would share it with ya. Please dont say forever cause forever isnt real. Please dont say forever cause it isnt how you feel. Please dont say forever cause forever falls apart. Please dont say forever cause youll just break my heart. -SouthernGirl- Link to comment
Ms. Babydoll Posted October 2, 2006 Share Posted October 2, 2006 simple yet so effective and heartfelt, well done Link to comment
yeawutever Posted October 3, 2006 Share Posted October 3, 2006 And now that you're 28, you're a lot stronger than that once naivee 15 year-old girl. Those things happen for a reason, to make you stronger, to make you who you are now. Great poem by the way!!!!!! Link to comment
blueangel Posted October 3, 2006 Share Posted October 3, 2006 You don't feel that way anymore? I think it's true. Nothing really lasts. That's what makes time so precious- because it's the one thing we'll never get a hold of. Everything fades within it. Everything is made to push forward. Time limits activate emotion. When there is a due date, we feel stress and the need for decisions. When there is a death date or a day where something is gone, we better learn to cherish it. It's an okay truth to acknowledge and I think you should expand on it, how it makes you feel- now especially. Because honestly, many people think about that... if only in the back of their mind. Link to comment
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