jaiva Posted September 14, 2006 Share Posted September 14, 2006 Playing constantly non-stop In my head, ringing in my ears What a sweet, sweet sound I LOVE YOU Bringing tears of sadness and joy The ending of one life, The beginning of another The joining of two worlds, Colliding of two ideas Two minds becoming one. I DO The two words that follow The never ending promises Sealed with a kiss I vow to you My heart, my mind, my soul, and my body My compassion, my understanding, my empathy I vow to cherish your every word I vow to be yours and yours alone Until death do us part. But not even death can take away my soul Our souls or our love So my love to you and you only I will say, I do. Jaiva Link to comment
yeawutever Posted September 14, 2006 Share Posted September 14, 2006 Great poem!!!!!! Link to comment
g44 Posted September 15, 2006 Share Posted September 15, 2006 Hello I've waited here for you Everlong Tonight I throw myself into And out of the red, out of her head she sang Come down And waste away with me Down with me Slow how You wanted it to be I'm over my head, out of her head she sang And I wonder When I sing along with you If everything could ever feel this real forever If anything could ever be this good again The only thing I'll ever ask of you You've got to promise not to stop when I say when She sang Breathe out So I can breathe you in Hold you in And now I know you've always been Out of your head, out of my head I sang And I wonder When I sing along with you If everything could ever feel this real forever If anything could ever be this good again The only thing I'll ever ask of you You've got to promise not to stop when I say when She sang And I wonder If everything could ever feel this real forever If anything could ever be this good again The only thing I'll ever ask of you You've got to promise not to stop when I say when She sang I slept with you In trees Under stars I ran for miles Hand in hand Love hurt so hard I'll die with you I'll give everything away And I'll die With you Here as I ly Ceiling staring down at me From this point of view For the day For these thoughts I stole everything from you I'll die for you As mountains start crumbling I'd die For you I'll die with you Give you everything I'd like to die With you Link to comment
jaiva Posted September 17, 2006 Author Share Posted September 17, 2006 Wow G44 that's an interesting piece. Jaiva Link to comment
doyathink Posted September 18, 2006 Share Posted September 18, 2006 I really like your poem jaiva Link to comment
jaiva Posted September 19, 2006 Author Share Posted September 19, 2006 Wow G44 you sound so much like me now. About a month or 2 ago I ended a 2 year relationship, which I have been posting about for a while. And I have finally been able to forgive him for all the things that he did. I've learned not to charge it to his heart but to his mind b/c he wasn't/isn't mentally mature enough to be in a relationship with me and that's not his fault. Not trying to dis him just tryna say that we don't connect anymore and that's not necesarily his fault and since I realized that I was able to move on and learn a very valuable lesson in return. Jaiva Link to comment
Ms. Babydoll Posted September 19, 2006 Share Posted September 19, 2006 wow I really like that poem Jaiva, it's so sweet!! Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted September 19, 2006 Share Posted September 19, 2006 I love it its so sweet. Link to comment
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