PRSOV Posted August 2, 2006 Share Posted August 2, 2006 For you, I'd gladly walk a mile If that would give me a chance to see you smile. I would call you my friend, but that's a lie you mean more to me than that, but I can't explain why For you are more precious than all of the world's gold But I can tell you that, how can I be that bold? If I spoke what's on my mind, would you accept me? Because without you, I don't know where I would be Link to comment
NKP Posted August 2, 2006 Share Posted August 2, 2006 Great poem i love it and can total relate to it Link to comment
weloveletters Posted August 2, 2006 Share Posted August 2, 2006 really a very nice poem Link to comment
PRSOV Posted August 2, 2006 Author Share Posted August 2, 2006 Not anytime soon folk thank you for your generous comments though Link to comment
Fisch Posted August 2, 2006 Share Posted August 2, 2006 Beautiful, thats all I wanted to say, but it was too short lol. Link to comment
Fisch Posted August 2, 2006 Share Posted August 2, 2006 No i meant my post was too short, it does not let you say just the word beautiful, sorry for the confusion lol. Link to comment
BornToResist Posted August 2, 2006 Share Posted August 2, 2006 Oooh I like it! Whoever it is about is very lucky. Link to comment
yeawutever Posted August 2, 2006 Share Posted August 2, 2006 Very sweet poem indeed!!!!!!!! Link to comment
Moon Goddess Posted August 11, 2006 Share Posted August 11, 2006 It is very sweet, beautiful. Nice work. Hope to see more poetry by you Link to comment
Steven1607307306 Posted August 11, 2006 Share Posted August 11, 2006 Nice. You have a knack for writing those short sweet poems. I can't write something so simple and give it such meaning as you. Great job, I love your style. Keep writing, I want to read more! Link to comment
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