phrack14 Posted June 19, 2006 Share Posted June 19, 2006 Sometimes when I'm alone I cry because I'm on my own All the tears I cry are bitter and warm They flow with life, and take no form Ah the world moves fast and it would rather pass you on by than to stop and see what makes you cry It's painful, so sad, sometimes I cry But no one really cares.. to ask why, why, why Well I cry because my heart is torn I find it hard to carry on And if I had an ear to confide in I would cry amongst my treasured friends A-but who do you know that stops that long to help another carry on Ah the world moves fast and it would rather pass you on by than to stop and see what makes you cry It's painful, so sad, sometimes I cry And no one really cares.. to ask why, why, why Tupac. Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted June 19, 2006 Share Posted June 19, 2006 Thats awesome! You have amazing talent and you gotta keep posting so i can keep reading lolz anywayz great work! Link to comment
MewSkitty Posted June 19, 2006 Share Posted June 19, 2006 Great poem, I haven't read poetry that great since I last wrote a poem. Maybe I'll go looking through my old box and post a few of my good ones. Thatnks for the reinsperation. Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted June 19, 2006 Share Posted June 19, 2006 i like your poem, confused when you put tupac at the end, i was like "hmmmm who did this?" hehe x lol to mewskitty x never seen any of your work, id like to see the fabulousness Link to comment
phrack14 Posted June 22, 2006 Author Share Posted June 22, 2006 Sorry, Tupac wrote it. Everyone should check out all of his other work its really good. Link to comment
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