pimpcess Posted July 4, 2003 Share Posted July 4, 2003 Hey y'all can any1 relate to this? Its the whole poem from my little thingy at the bottom. ''You'' If your looks disappeared, I'd still love you, If u had no money, I wouldn't shove you, If your world crashed tomorrow then I'd still be there, If every1 turned against u, baby I'd still care, Anytime your upset, Anytime your off track, U can rely on me, I've always got your back, Anytime your feelin down, I'll support u mentally, Coz Im so grateful I found u, And u were sent 2 me, When I look to my future, Your all i see, Your everything I wished, My life to be, And if I could be anything in the world, I'd be your tear, So I'd be born in your eye, And you'd always be near, I'd live down your cheek, On your lips I'd die, But life would've been perfect, Because you were nearby, I'll always be there in, Whatever u go through, And I'll cherish the day, That I say 'I DO', Your perfect, and honest, And faithful, and true, And I want to say thankyou, Thankyou for being you. Link to comment
doblersdream Posted July 4, 2003 Share Posted July 4, 2003 Hi Pimpcess Beautiful words.....whoever you wrote that for is a lucky man! Link to comment
pimpcess Posted July 4, 2003 Author Share Posted July 4, 2003 Thankyou doblers dream! I thought some1 was gonna say it was terrible, I've never shown it before, glad u liked it. Link to comment
Cuu Posted July 4, 2003 Share Posted July 4, 2003 I like it. I've been copying everybody's quote from this forum and adding it to my desktop wallpaper. I'm gonna add your poem to it. Thx Link to comment
pimpcess Posted July 4, 2003 Author Share Posted July 4, 2003 Yay yay yay yay yay yay I love positive feedback! Thanx people! Link to comment
tobigahart Posted July 4, 2003 Share Posted July 4, 2003 That wallpaper is a nice idea Cuu You must be someone who truly appreciates love for everything that it is... Link to comment
J_Rocc Posted July 4, 2003 Share Posted July 4, 2003 hey pimpcess, that poem was simply awesome. u got a talent. keep 'em comin. Link to comment
pimpcess Posted July 4, 2003 Author Share Posted July 4, 2003 Wow I got like 119 views and all positive feedback, result!!! Link to comment
writergurl Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 It's a fantastic poem. Keep writing, I'd love to read more. Link to comment
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 That was a great poem.It had great rhythm and good expression. ~Meagan~ Link to comment
Stinkweed Posted August 17, 2004 Share Posted August 17, 2004 This poem is really good. I really like your use of rhythm. It's good that you feel taht way about someone. Great job =D>. Link to comment
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